My Website Contest

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    OK GUYS I HAVE A NEW WEBSITE BUT I DONT HAVE ENOUGH POEMS SO I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE A CONTEST

    RULES

    1-MUST BE YOUR OWN WORK
    2-1 POEM PER PERSON
    3-ANY POEMS IN ANY CATEGORY
    4-AS LONG AS YOU WANT

    PRIZES

    1ST-GETS 10 OF THEIR POEMS ON MY WEBSITE IN THEIR OWN LITTLE SECTION ALSO I WILL RRC ON 5 POEMS ADD THEM TO MY FAVORITES AND RECCOMEND THEM IN MY PROFILE

    2ND-5 OF THEIR POEMS ON MY WEBSITE BUT ~NOT! IN THEIR OWN SECTION 5 RRC AND ADDED TO FAVS

    3RD-3 OF THEIR POEMS ON MY WEBSITE BUT !NOT! IN THEIR OWN SECTION 2 RRC

    4TH-2 RCC

    OK MY WEBSITE WILL BE POSTED AT END AND THE ~WINNERS~ WILL ONLY NEED TO POST WHAT POEMS THEY WANT TO BE ON MY WEBSITE AND I WILL PUT THEM ON THEIR WITH THEIR NAME OF COURSE!

    CONTEST WILL END WHEN I WANT IT TOO

    SO GOOD LUCK AND HAVE FUN!!!!!

    TABBY

  • Chad Reamer
    18 years ago

    Love In Your Eyes

    On a day when I’m down and out
    you pick me up like no one else.
    You grab my hand in your’s,
    you look at me and tell me this...

    I’ll love you today
    I’ll love you tomorrow gone.
    I’ll be here till the day begone,
    Just close your eyes and think.
    It’ll be me in your mind,
    I’ll have you in mine.

    I look back deep in your eyes and think,
    I can’t believe God would give something as precious as this.
    I pray to keep this with me forever more.
    I look back deep in your eyes and say...

    I’ll love you today,
    I’ll love you tomorrow gone.
    I’ll be here till the day begone,
    Just close your eyes and think.
    You’ll be in mine as me in your’s.

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    Good night kiss
    by Italian Stallion

    When I kissed you
    I felt like I flew
    that good night kiss
    was in my birthday wish
    your soft tender lips
    against mine tastes just fine
    that good night kiss
    I just could not miss
    thanks to you I got my wish

  • holly
    18 years ago

    Hey I know it's impossible,
    but I tried for perfection
    cause I wanted acceptance
    and you gave rejection.

    I didn't hate you - I wanted to love you
    and when each day did dawn - grass soaked with dew
    once again I'd fake that smile
    just so i could be, good enough for you.

    Some call it pathetic,
    Some say it's lame,
    but day after day
    i'll continue on in this childish game

    I'll beg for you love,
    and with the most forced of smiles - ill try all day long.
    Till alone in my room, ill turn up the radio and cry until dawn
    then one day ill realise I'll realize I got it all wrong.

    I needn't have endured the put-downs and the pain
    I didn't need to feel so worthless or meek
    I didn't need to play your stupid little game
    and let you walk all over me.

    Cause I can never be all that you wanted of me!
    I can't change the way I am - I can't be perfect!
    The truth is your no better than me!
    and a true friend would love me, JUST AS I AM

  • PURE HEART
    18 years ago

    LOVE- TRUELY PURE

    Love me the way i want you to,
    grasp me in your arms as u always do.
    I feel an ease melting in your arms,
    you set me free, u set me calm.

    Make me lay my head on your shoulder,
    I feel your strength inside me and u make me bolder.
    Your hands crawling so gentle over my hair,
    from deep down i feel a touch of care.

    You pull me tightly much closer to you,
    you can feel me and the same i can do.
    Your hands hold mines tightly,
    and i get lost in your world slightly.

    Give me the love i always desired for,
    let me feel the soul of yours.
    My heart now wants nothing more
    just your LOVE thats truely pure....

    BY BHARTI

  • Sole
    18 years ago

    Nightmares

    Flicking through the pages of nightmares
    Watching the clock of dreams tick by
    Images flashing before my existence
    A pitiful sight, a sore to the eye

    Reading the book of lonely being
    Drinking the glass of tears that cry
    Tasting the hurt, watching the time
    And people dreaming, don't deny

    A sorrowful movie, the pain of night
    Drunken humour tells a lie
    And sets to rest the nightmare-weavers
    As the grasp of fate does slowly die

    On and on, tossing and turning
    Under the sheets, it's hard to try
    And avert this mind from all the dreaming
    And take the dreamer from the sky

    But one by one the nightmares end
    Winged devil's rest who once did fly
    Flicking through the pages of nightmares
    Watching the clock of dreams tick by

    Peace. [Sole]

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    My Real Life
    by Tara-Kay

    No-one really knows how I feel or what goes on inside me,
    No-one really knows the person I really want to be.
    I am so quiet and I am shy on the outside,
    But inside I want to shout and I don't want to hide.

    I want to tell the world how what goes on in my heart,
    Tell my friends I miss them when we are apart.
    I want to hold this guy so close in my arms,
    I want to be captured so deeply by his charms.

    I don't want to be all lonely like I am,
    I want to face things head on like I don't give a damn.
    I wish I could go out in the world being me,
    Knowing that after this day I will be totally free.

    I go home of a night and I want to cry,
    But I sit and think and wonder why.
    I look for some comfort in my old friends,
    And slowly my broken little heart mends.

    I am only as strong as I want to be,
    The person you see on the outside is not really me.
    I have a lot of things I would like to say,
    But for me it is really hard to find a way.

    This is my real life here that I'm now showing,
    And as long as I believe this is where I am going.
    I will not let anyone upset me anymore,
    Because if they do then it'll be them I chuck out the door.

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    good so far

  • Allison
    18 years ago

    Why has this happened?
    by Alyson

    My troubles are long gone
    Now I'm standing here
    In this desolate world
    Alone and abandoned

    All around me are the ruins
    Of once grand buildings
    Broken and shattered
    Until they no longer exist

    The harsh winds blow dust
    Across the face of this vast land
    Leaving the fields barren
    Where food no longer grows

    Most rivers have run dry
    Leaving behind cracked earth
    That screams in the night
    For help

    Tears slide silently down my cheeks
    As I look at what this worlds become
    Its no longer grand or beautiful
    But dry and unforgiving

    Why has this happened?
    I say its because of our sins
    All the wrongs that we've done
    And all the beliefs we've held against others

    *This holds a message can you find it?

  • Tisha
    18 years ago

    "Forever Yours"
    Restless hearts sleep alone tonight
    Holding onto the thought of each other tight
    A thousand miles lye between me and your smile
    Knowing from the time I see you in my mind,
    to in person will only be awhile
    A song playing on the radio reminds me of you
    Your presence is here with me in everything that I do
    Being away from you is not easy on me
    I close my eyes and you are all I can see
    The excitement inside me soars
    Knowing forever I will always be yours

    ©Tisha

    *It must be love if you feel this way about some one when you are away from them*

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    GOOD SO FAR

  • PURE HEART
    18 years ago

    UNHEALED WOUNDS...

    I can see the swarm of people there,
    all are aloof and no one is cared.
    lost in their own world of pains,
    they are hurt and thats the reason they are here.

    In the wine of their glasses,
    they find their faces unknown.
    its hard for them to identify themselves
    as they are so aloof, so alone.

    They cry out their words so loud,
    and burst out their anger filled-in.
    they try to vommit their heart out of their mouth,
    but keep on drinking whisky and gin.

    They swollow every peg of drink down their throat,
    and bring them out through their crying eyes.
    the tears are not just salted droplets but,
    its the pain and grief which lies inside.

    People come and forget themselves,
    by talking to the strangers they never know.
    shouting "cheers" so loud to hide their pain
    their grief is lessen and pain is so low.

    Some come here bcoz they are cheated,
    some to reduce their grief.
    some come here to forget their beloved,
    and some come here for ease.

    This place is a world to them,
    where they can do what they wish to.
    they are away from this world so cruel,
    which gives them the pains and unhealed wounds too...

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    any more
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  • Chad Reamer
    18 years ago

    nope u should end it now

  • Italian Stallion
    18 years ago

    ^^ agreed

  • Latasha
    18 years ago

    i dtk if ur stopping it but eh...

    Scars of Abuse...
    by Latasha

    My broken tears,
    Are stopped by all my fears,
    I can not let anyone see my feelings,
    Or the scars I fear become reality.

    I wish someone knew my broken bones,
    Werent from falling down the stairs,
    They were from my daddy,
    The powerful man everyone idolizes.

    They dont see the true man,
    That lies between his words,
    The one that beats me,
    The man that gives me little strength to carry on.

    Today is the day everyone will say good-bye,
    To the young girl they once knew,
    The girl who always wore a smile no matter what that meant,
    That young girl was me.

    After a few to many drinks,
    I mustve said something wrong,
    To make my daddy hate me so much,
    Tears were running down my cheeks.

    My final words were nothing but mumbles,
    No one seen my bruises,
    They only seen my beautiful smile,
    And my pretty face.

    If only someone wouldve taken a moment,
    To see all my scars,
    Maybe I wouldve still been alive,
    But there is nothing left of me.

    Im now just a girl,
    Everyone once knew,
    That hid behind her smile,
    To ignore the pain here daddy caused.

  • Fallen~Tears
    18 years ago

    A childs pain.. by Meaghen

    He wakes up thinking maybe today
    will be the day everything will be alright
    but soon he'll realize he'll be
    crying those lonely tears tonight

    As screams ring in his ears
    and cuts run down his arms
    he tries to be ok
    trying to act like he doesnt know about lifes harms

    only a boy of 5 years old
    should never know this pain
    but he does
    as pain shoots threw every vein

    Never knowing any different
    from fights and tears
    never knowing what its like
    to live without all these fears

    all he hears is "your not good enough"
    and "why are you here"
    those are the times he prays
    he could just disappear

    One last hit
    thats all he could take
    He'd be doing them a favor
    he was just a mistake

    Thats the night
    that god took him for his own
    He'd never feel anymore pain
    He'd always be with him sitting beside the golden throne..

  • Chad Reamer
    18 years ago

    haha well guess not but when is this competition gonna be over?

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    there is only 13 i will end it when i have 15

    will that make u happy

    :-)

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    THIS WAS A VERY HARD DECISION BUT I AM DONE HERE THEY ARE~

    1ST-BOB WITH DYING EMBERS (THIS WAS SUCH A WONDERFUL POEM AND I FELT THAT IT DESERVED FIRST PLACE SO CONGRATS!)

    2ND-SOLE WITH NIGHTMARES (THIS POEM WAS EXCELLENT GREAT JOB)

    3RD-KRISTEN WITH HELLO THERE STRANGER
    (EXCELLENT JOB I PICKED THIS CAUSE I RELATE TO IT ALOT)

    4TH-TARA KAY WITH MY REAL LIFE (GREAT POEM I REALLY ENJOYED IT!)

    OK THERE THEY ARE NOW! I WILL GIVE U RRC AFTER I PUT UR POEMS ON MY WEBSITE SO ALL I NEED NOW IS THE POEMS THAT YOU GUYS WANT ON THERE! AFTERWARD I WILL GIVE YOU THE WEBSITE ADDRESS PUT THE LIST ON HERE THANKS!

    THANKS AND CONGRATS TO MY FOUR WINNERS AND TO EVERYONE ELSE THAT ENTERED THIS WAS A GREAT VARIETY OF POEMS!

    TABBY

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    cheers Tabby.
    I'm glad you liked the poem
    xxxxx

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    YOUR WELCOME

    I WILL PUT THEM ON THERE SOON MAYBE LATER TOMORROW BUT I NEED THE REST OF THE WINNERS TO PUT THEIRS ON THERE

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    ok last but not least sole i need 5 poems waiting on u buddy!

    eveyone will get their comments and votes later ok !

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    KRISTEN I DID YOURS

    BOB I PICKED MY TEN FAVORITE INCLUDING DYING EMBERS

    I AM STILL WAITING FOR SOLE AFTER HE GIVES ME HIS I WILL GIVE YOU THE ADDRESS!

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    sole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Loulou
    18 years ago

    nevermind ok the site is

    http://www.piczo.com/TLLpoems?g=6819901&cr=5

    chk it out i will get rrc soon but i am too busy
    right now