New poem

Hey I posted a new poem, can u plz comment on it, I will return the fav, thnx. Just say what ones u want me to comment on.
Take Care
Luv Sarah!!

Hi I read your the one (hate to be picky but it should be you're) lol :P Great poem!
Could you read 'Vivisection' please?
Thank you

hey thnx, I read n commented on ur poem! I liked it :)