read a poem please

what do we think. should i keep it or do i need a lot of work. i want honesty. i dont care if you hate it and what to whiteout the screen in an effort to get away from it. i want to know.

to the silent "stranger"

why're you sitting there
staring at me
why dont you say something
for a change

any one word
can make the difference
don't just sit there
staring at me

this is the fourth year
of you in my classes
of you staring at me
with a word of anything

maybe this is your year
just talk and tell me
what you wnat
and maybe ill give it to you

so my dear you're sitting
there thinking of me
so how about coming
and talking to me.

i like it, it has a good message but i dont think you should abbreviate 'why are' in the first line, it has a better rhytmn if you use 'why are you' instead of 'why're you'

xxx