Testing the waters...

I have recently put about 4 new poems up....I would love people to comment/rate/ or whatever and give me some feedback!!

I am not very good, so some advice would be welcomed. Here come the titles....:

"A secret never to be told..."
"It fell"
"What am I?"
"Love me tender"

Tell me how many you comment or w/e and I will do the same for you....specify poems if you wish....

[lostlaureate- come find me]

*waits*

yeh I'll check out your stuff, I've heard good things about you anyway,

could you look at
"Velvet Kiss" and
"Shrinking Violet" if its not too much trouble

thankyu :)

love
XxFeEBeDeExX

Just Tonight I'll Light A Candle please

Beautifullyinadequate.....i have read your poems...and cowered in the presence of your poetry...

Great stuff....how are u finding mine?

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Yeah - comment some of mine :) Please. It might cheer me up . . .

Peace. [Sole]

Kaylee Rose...your poetry is like a rose....once hidden under thorns but blooming gracefully....

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Sole...I have done most of yours if there anything you want me to in particular give me some titles..?

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Anyone else?