edits

well i edited a bunch of poems that you all said needed changes.
so if anyone wants to read them
naturally i would return the favor

isolation
mall
constellation
to the silent stranger- which apparently still needs work
earthquake
memories
spring- this is the one i really want feedback on.

thanks

well for those of you who read my "lost toy" well ive completly changed it and given it a completely new meaning. if anyone wants to read it.