speakless...

i wrote second peom and i thought that i will not write anything more...
i feel that this one is quite bad, so please gimme some critics. I would try to comment urs poem aswell.

so please comment vote on my poem - speakless...

sure i'll check it out for you
pip xxx

thank you, anyone else? :

Please could you look at some of my poems...just flick through and comment/rate-/watever....

Thanks

[lostlaureate- come find me]

thank you, I commented two of yours, and i believe i will comment some more when i find some time.
Your poems are really good.

dont stop writing your poems are pretty good.