New contest

okay let me tell you what this poetry contest is all about. First of all i want you to write about a guy/gurl that you have a crush on but you don't know what if you should tell them! Sounds fun right? of course! Here are the rules:

NO EXCPILCIT/PROFANITY POEMS!!
NO BAD WORDS
IT HAS TO BE BETWEEN 20 TO 40 LINES
ONLY SUBMIT ONE POEM
I WILL CLOSE THIS CONTEST AND PUT THE WINNERS WHEN I FEEL I HAVE ENOUGH POEMS!

PRIZES:
1ST PLACE: I WILL COMMENT ON ALL YOUR POEMS NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU HAVE AND I WILL VOTE ON ALL YOUR POEMS

2ND PLACE: I WILL COMMENT ON 5 OF YOUR POEMS AND VOTE ON 2

3RD PLACE: I WILL COMMENT ON 3 POEMS AND VOTE ON 1

4TH PLACE: I WILL VOTE ON ONE AND COMMENT ON ONE

5TH,6TH,7TH ECT.: YOU WON'T GET ANYTHING BUT KEEP TRYING

~Where To Start~

The worst is when you love someone,
as more than just a friend.
She teases you and flirts with you,
to you it's not pretend.

All her friends will tell you,
"I think she likes you too."
You'll knod and shake your head,
as if you already knew.

But, inside you are always questioning,
if to her it's just a game.
But, you're in love, it makes no difference,
to you it's all the same.

You sit with her when your alone,
and try to take things further.
No further than a hug or kiss,
and she's labeled you a pervert.

Now things are all messed up,
because you had thought wrong.
She didn't really like you,
you were right all along.

Sometimes, when you're in love,
you take things more to heart.
When it comes to women,
men have no clue where to start.

~Sean Dohr~

Confession Of My Confused Heart

Here's a Confession,
of my Feelings for You
You Never Would Have Guessed It,
but i Love you It's true.

((YEAR 7))
The First Day i Met You,
You were Just another Guy.
Two Years Older,
You were in Year Nine.

((YEAR 7 + 8))
Sure You Were Nice,
But In The First Year or Two,
Just an Acquaintance,
I never Dreamed I'd Fall For You.

((YEAR 9))
A Shared Experience,
That Brought Us Together,
A Random Chance,
It Changed Me Forever

((YEAR 10))
Now Closer Than Before,
Our Friendship Grew,
Now We Talk All The Time
And I've Fallen For You!

I Never Would Have Guessed It
On That First Day
And I Don't Know What To Do
Cause You'll Never Feel The Same.

So I'll Write This Confession
Which You'll Never See
I'll Spill Out My Heart,
Then Continue To Dream. . .

Disguise (Condensed)
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You always seem to be there
When I'm feeling down
You're happy when I laugh
And you're sad when I frown
I've told you all my secrets
But one, the way I feel
I've told you many times in dreams
But this time it's for real

Feelings unknown
Your friendship's shown
My mind is blown
It is true
Can't tell you now
I tell you how
Don't want to row
I love you

When I know
What you don't
What I show
Where you won't
I just lie
You ask why
Please see through my
Disguise

If I were you
It would be clear
The way I feel
And what's to fear?
Theres something more
Behind these eyes
But you have to look
To see inside

Feelings unknown
Your friendship's shown
My mind is blown
It is true
Can't tell you now
I tell you how
Don't want to row
I love you

****************************************

Peace. [Sole]

YOU FEEL THE SAME TOO...

Do you know how many feelings i carry in my heart,
how do i end my day and how do i start.
Missing you and longing for you is all i can do,
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how many unspoken words i want to say,
how can i say i keep on finding the ways.
Loving you and praying for you is all i can do
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how many dreams i have in my eyes,
how can i fulfill them i keep on telling the lies.
Preaching you and caring for you is all i can do,
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how much pain is deep in my soul,
how do i bear them and keep trying to come out of the whole,
Searching you and urging for you is all i can do
but i wish as i feel you feel the same too.

Do you know how much I LOVE YOU,
i wanna tell but unable to do.
Missing you, loving you, preaching you, searching you , wat else i can do,
I wish as i feel you feel the same too........

***its about my first crush and may b love....***

when time touch its destiny....

Captivating the sight of your dream...
fabrics of thought lies shattered
treasures mountain, tranquil stream
season of bless slowly weathered...

the glittering sunlight peeps from the sky....
await for your solace touch
cascading the green, green grass
shimmering splendid brought the sense of peace....

trees bow in silence...
within your abundant charm of loveliness
break away the cold spell of winter
put us in a warm consolation...

the gushes of the stream, the gold arbion of water
splashing arround us as raindrops of love....
a simple life that i always fancy
which i hope comes to eternity

but alas...
what a woeful despair
i am simply lack of flair
when this heart strangled of hapinnes
i just unfamiliar with words
the word of love seems hidden solemntly with the evening wind
the ordinary thing that i've never seen

stuck in a pile of sand
on just another way of saying goodnight.....
although deep in my heart
just like heaven, i want to hold u tight..

sharing such unbridle life, apart from all turbulence..
such sentimental scenery and the wild night
girl thats all i've been longing
yet i left in silence without saying anything...

sometimes i feel like a silly star
lamenting its ability to twinkle
listening to your wish , and dream, with your special style
but i just end up with smile.....

i just believe that one day
when time touch its destiny..
i could bring you inside my story
our fairy world, enchanted with affinity...

edit: sorry about that. here is my new entry:

To the silent stranger
by Poonam

why are you sitting there
staring at me
why don't you say something
for a change

any one word
can make all the difference
don't just slouch there
and pretend to forget me

this is the fourth year
of you in my classes
of you just peering without
a expression of anything

maybe this is your time
just talk and speak your mind
of what you want me to know
and maybe ill love you even more

for all these years
of you staring at me
ive grown to love
the look of your eyes

huge pools to everywhere
azure exotic blue
seeing me the way others dont
placing me above the rest

so my dear you're sitting
there thinking of me
so how about coming
and talking to me.

tell me whats on your mind
and ill tell you that
ive been waiting to hear
what you want to say

that for all the days
you've wanted to say
that you love me

Thanx Poonam..your poem is back in!

I am going to close this contest when 10 poems are entered!

There is no more poems coming in so i am going to close this contest and start judging.

Okay here are the results:

1st place: Sean Dohr- I love the way your poem flows and rhymes..Keep up the good work and congrats!!

2nd place: Pure heart- This poem was kind of a tongue twister at first...haha.. But I eventually got it and I love it!! Keep it up!!

3rd place: Sole- Where do I begin! haha! I love this poem..expesially the title!

3rd place: Invisible 2 u- You are tied with Sole because you both had really good poems! Nice work!

4th place: Poonam- Good Job!! Don't ever stop writing poetry!!

To the rest of you guys thanx for entering and I enjoyed reading all of your poems!!

Thank you sooooo much for picking my poem for first place!!! Great contest, all poems were AMAZING : ) I like how you commented/rated so soon after the contest ended.

~Sean Dohr~

thank you sooo much. mwah

Many thanks.

Peace. [Sole]

oh dear thank u so much! all were amazing. i read some of them.

No thank you guys for having such wonderful and delightful poems....it was really hard to judge in this contest because you guys are all great poets...but keep up the good work!!!!

Always & Forever,
~Adriana~

wow thankyou so much, congratulations to everyone :D
xxALLYxx