Finally back from bootcamp

Hey guys, I'm finally back from bootcamp and stationed at my unit. Going off to afganastan soon so I've been writing a lot. This is a peice about a small one I know who has it hard and who I love a lot and wish the best for. Check it out and maybe post what you think about it. Not the best ryhme scheme, I know. But it's what it is. It's dubed: "Another Way To Survive."

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=654725

wow i thought it was great..