NEW CONTEST!!!

Okay this contest is well..kinda different...So you know how people sometimes judges you before they get to know you...yeah we all had that happen before..so in this contest you guys have to make a poem about yourself (DESCRIBING YOURSELF) Like what you like to do, what color hair you have ECT. just anything that has to do about your life and YOU!! So here are the rules:

1 poem per person
any length of poem
has to rhyme (at least try)
Has to include your name in the poem or username
and no excplicit/profanity poems please
Has to be YOUR own work
Contest will close April 14th
So get going!!!

READY....GET SET......GO..GO..GO!!!HAHA

Forgot the prizes sorry...

1st place: I will comment on all their poems add them to my favorites and vote on all their poems...and probaly a lot more..

2nd place: I will comment on 5 poems and Vote on 5 and put you on my favorites list

3rd Place: I will comment on 3 and vote on 3..

4th place: I will comment on 2 and vote on 2....

5th place: I will comment on 1 and vote on 1

6th Place: same as 5th place

7th place: same as 5th place and 6th place

i wrote a good one, but my computer logged me out and i lost it. sigh. ill come back

Must our name be in the poem, no exceptions?

Well if you feel as if you really don't want your name in the poem then just put it in the title....okay..:)

Sole
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I like extreme sports, I like to rock climb
Bodyboarding gives me such a great time
I enjoy writing poetry, but it has to rhyme!

I have some great friends, always there for me
I play bass in a band, makes me feel free
But Quasar really makes me happy!

But few people see me from the inside
Few people see the thoughts that I hide
Hide from the world, so no-one will know
What I'm thinking inside, I will never show.

I have friends who judge me for the good times, in town
And not for what I feel deep down
I have a friend who is judging me now as I write
Good or bad, I have no insight

My life is hollow, I'm rarely high
Before I sleep, each night I cry
Now the truth is no longer a lie
As my tears are falling, I often wish to die

Few people see this other side
I always shun it out of the light
From the stupid world to hide
My love, hidden in eternal night

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Peace. [Sole]

i wear black clothes
i have black hair
it seems i'm a shaddow
as you dont' see me there

i know im quiet
and maybe shy
but it doesn't mean when you see me
you should walk on by

my friends act cool
go off for a smoke
ignore my feelings
as if they're a joke

my name's linzi
im fourteen years old
can't they see my pain
do they have to be told?

who am i?

Who am I?
A fake is who I am,
Living a life
Which is all a sham.
What you see
Is not what you get
To know the real me
Is something I rarely permit.
It’s not that I hate others
Not that I dislike them all
I just cannot trust them
And never could that I can recall.
So that is how I am,
Orion the fake
Hiding from life
As grass hides a snake,
Slithering though the undergrowth
Wanting no one to see its path,
Not wanting to hurt others
Or to feel a persons wrath.
The real me is hidden
Lost deep within
In the game of life
I know I cannot win.
And that is who I am,
A lost and broken soul
Wandering though existence
A life beyond control.

I am a girl,
Just a girl, it's true
Inside my heart beats
Just like you

As the days go by
My emotions brood
No pain ever alters
My melancholy mood

Why do they shout?
Standing pround and coy
Throwing insults and looks
"Are you a girl or a boy"

As I sit in the doorway
With my hands on my face
I cry to the heavens
Because I have no place

A few sacred people
Offer me soul release
But as I live without them
I slowly decease

As stars keep exploding
Heros give up the fight
Leaving me all alone
Punching holes through the night

I am a girl,
But my dream's askew
Inside I'm different
I'm not like you

My name is Louisa

I am liking the poems so far

~Me, Sean Dohr~

I am but a book,
a book beyond a cover.
If you step inside my cover and look,
a whole new world you will discover.

At times the words do not make sense,
and at times I stutter and stumble.
Sometimes my thoughts are too immense,
and my mind and body crumble.

Sometimes my pages are tattered and torn,
from issues in the past.
You should understand why my cover is worn,
because of all the problems I've had to outlast.
But this is all fine, as long as you see,
that when you look past my cover there is much more to me.

~Sean Dohr~

.....contest closed

First place: Sole- Your poem really touched my heart..I really love that poem and you are a great poet....congrats!

2nd place: Sean dohr- Wow! You are either 1st or 2nd in my contests...you are blessed..lol....I will wait until you put new poems up and then I will comment and vote..since I already commented and voted on all of yours already..lol...congrats!

3rd Place: Azlan 26- I love the way your poem is so much like me...lol...I love it...keep up the good work!

4th place: Master of Shadow- Not only are you the master of shadow..you are the master at poetry...keep it up!

5th place: Linzi- I don't even know what to say except never give up and never quit writing poetry....congrats!

6th place: Brianna- Good Job gurl!!!haha...keep up the good work!

Thanks again, for a great contest and for picking me for second place!!! I hope, I can keep impressing you guys with my poetry. ALL POEMS WERE GREAT : )

~Sean Dohr~

And another well judged contest . . lol. No really, thanks very much though I'm sure I don't really deserve it. Congratulations to everyone else who entered too, well done!

Peace. [Sole]

Hey Adriana, I have 4 new poems. You are free to comment on any of those that you like!!! : )

~Sean Dohr~

Divorce
by Trisha

I'm suck in this life,
Being accussed of something I didn't do,
Something that I'm not aloud to see my brother,
And now after court I'm being accussed of seeing him now,
Oh how I wish I would take a lie dector test,
To prove to them I did none of the short,
Then he would be caught in a lie not me,
Then I would feel better,

I feel as if I'm causing my mom pain,
By her having me,
He's blaming all his problems on me,
I'm the one caught in the middle,
I feel as if I'm holding down my mom for not being able to have my brother and sister,
If I wasn't here she wouldn't be crying right now,
But then again he would just be blaming all this crap on her instead of me,

It should show that I'm at least trying to get help,
If I had "problems,"
But the judge should see that all he's doing is putting lies on people,
That he has not made an effort to get HELP!

When all this started I liked him until,
He married my mom,
Then he started to get mean,
I never called him"dad,"
He started pulling my hair and darning me by my hair to my room from the living room all the way on the other side of the house,
Doesn't the judge see that!
Doesn't he know what's going on,

I feel the only way to help my mom is to get rid of myself,
So she wouldn't be crying right now,
I just want to make my mom happy,
And that's with my brother and my sister,
Mother this for you and your happiness.

does thar count? its about a part in my life.

Thank you guys for making this contest the best contest.. i loved all your poems and thank you guys for your comments it really means something to me when you guys do that..thanx a lot...

umm trisha the contest was already over sorry..............................................................................................................................................Oh sole when you made the comment about I don't really deserve it...obviously you do deserve it cause your in 1st place....and you might think that you didn't but you did....keep it up Sole and to all of you guys........Reading your guys poetry is like a fun thing to do thanx

Hey, you can comment on "Bad Egg" and/or "My Bleeding, Dying Heart" now!!! Thanks a lot : )

~Sean Dohr~