pls my soul is burdened

can anyone pls read & comment on my new poem.. precious life... its for my friend who hung herself today....
and im so damn depressed !!!!

Yeah, commented . . . nice poem . . .

Peace. [Sole]

i know it has lot of faults but cant think much now... still shaken
will edit later..
thanks to ppl who care to read & share this with me

I did it =] Very good sweety. && I'm very sorry for your loss. . .