NEW DEAL

Ok.. Well I want more comments and votes.. && I bet you do aswell.
So here's the deal. Im not fussed which ones of mine you do, But how ever many you do, I will do the same for you.

But PLEASE don't just put "great poem" ..or.. "i liked it"
I want real comments. Tips to make it better. I'll use honesty in yours aswell.

Thanks --- And please leave the names of the poems that you want done.. I really don't like picking.

ok i want you to read thses three new ones i just wrote today

Silent message, alwasy with me, and listen to me

what are the one you want me to read