I NEED TO KNOW

please i just wrote these today an i really want people to rate cuase i wanna know how good of a poet i am so far
i have been writing for a while but i don't think people are telling me the truth when they say it was good

please rate thses three...

Silent message, Always with me,
and listen to me

the author name will be shannon

i've read all 3 of your peices, unfortuantly though i could only comment upon 2 as the site kept logging me out when i attempted to do so upon the other. they are well written.