Hey people

Hey everyone, I just posted a new poem called In The Dark and I would really appreciate some rates and comments. It's the first depresed poem i've written in a while and i've always been more fond of these then the others.
So I'm getting off the comp for the night now, but I'll return the favour to people to read it and comment as soon as i get on again. =) thanks

Read, and commented. I'll give you several choices on which of mine you'd like to read and comment.
Short Story
Do You Hear?
Succumb
How to Show
Love Revisited
She'll Never Know
Indecision
To Nicole
I thank you in advance for your consideration and response.