New to this option. Requesting readers.

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    I'd like to ask all to give consideration to these several poems. These are some of my favorites, and before you read them I would like you to keep this idea in mind. I am asking no favors. I will return all given comments, in time(asap). But, I only want comments on those poems which you felt inclined to do so. If you feel no inclination towards commenting, please, DO NOT COMMENT. Thank you in advance for your consideration and response.
    Do You Hear?
    Short Story
    AMEN
    Entreaty and Disclaim
    Erase
    Succumb
    How to Show
    Love Revisited
    She'll Never Know
    Indecision
    He's Always There(Ballad)
    To Nicole
    Thank you again.
    Daniel Mulvany

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Heyy, I did these ones;

    `Do You Ever?
    `Short Story
    `She'll Never Know

    Could you please do these for me ?

    `Mummy, I Miss You.
    `Look At What You're Tearing Apart.
    `Mirror Mirror

    `natalie x-x

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Done. Thank you again, for your comments. I really appreciated them Natalie.

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Oh, and I love Panic! They're awesome. But my favorite song is Lying is the Most Fun a Girl Can Have Without Taking Her Clothes Off.
    So testosterone boys and harlequin girls,
    Dance to this beat!

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    lol.. Same!! I only just started listening to them though, So I only have a couple of there songs.
    But I love "I write sins, Not tragedies" ..lol

    But yeah, Your poems were great, && Thanks for commenting on mine!

    `natalie

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    any of my new ones

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Any more takers?

  • The Angel of Secrets
    19 years ago

    sure.. I'll check'em out

  • The Angel of Secrets
    19 years ago

    sure.. I'll check'em out

  • Daze
    19 years ago

    i'll do one if you can do lusting chaos for me, thanks.

  • lost_laureate
    19 years ago

    I looked at "Do you hear?"
    Please could you look at one of my poems.

    Thanks.

    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Alright. All commented. Even you Daze. Thank you guys.

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Any one else interested?

  • Laura
    19 years ago

    i thought i posted but i guess i didn't...lol

    Sure gona check your out now....If you could check out one of mine called Only A State Of Mind

    I would really appreciate!

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Read and commented. Thank you Laura.

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Done Rach. I'm gona hit you up with some more later. Thank you again.

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    I did Do You Hear? Great poem!
    Could you please do
    "Broken"?
    Thanks!!

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Done Bridgette. Thank you.

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago

    Done My1&only.

  • Daniel Mulvany
    19 years ago