Turn the Page

I'd appreciate a few comments on Turn the Page (link noted below). This writing style is a bit different for me, but the best way I knew how to portray the feelings. Thanks in advance.

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=652220

Just did ... and will admit to reading it a couple of times. A beautiful write! Currently I can't leave a comment on it as I keep getting logged off when I try, but I'll make note to go back and write more. Cheers!