Honest Comments Are A Must.

When I get a comment like, "That's good" or, "I know how you feel." I feel like maybe people weren't really paying attention when they read. I had somebody write, "That's sexy." as a comment for my poem: The Forgotten Witness. Which, for those who have read it, repersents nothing sexy in the least. So what I'm asking for are honest comments on the following poems:

When Past And Present Collide
The Forgotten Witness
Ink Stained Hands
Free And Beautiful No Longer
Beneath Guiding Lights
and anymore of my featured ones and I will comment honestly on yours. Leave titles and once I finish making up for one members poems I will comment on yours. Thank you.

Alright, no interest

Some of them were edited to. I've reworking on alot of them and hope to have some new ones tonight if you'd rather wait. I can comment on yours now and you can return the favor later.

You can just return the favor later :)