give me some comments on 2 poems

i am hoping someone will comment on my 2 newest poems

I won't be hurt by silly words,
Heartless.

They arent exactly the best i've written but thats why i want comments, please be honest.
xxx

They rawked!!

I'd just like to thank you Tara for all the wonderfully helpful comments you have given me lately they have been very encouraging. I hope my comments can do some magic for you too!!

Be lovely if could could look at some more of my stuff. All the best.

xxx