believe me or any others of mine

hey if you could help me out by getting me a comment on one or two of my poems I would really like that you know what I mean well yeah if you do luv ya lots if not then I dunno well I don't luv you as much I guess yeah well I really am recently new to this but I would really like my poems to get recognized so please help me
luv ya lots amber

Hey I commented on three, nice :) It'd be very cool if you could look at my latest two 'She Hides' or 'No Longer,' keep writing x