my poems suck.

i dont know whats happened but my poems are all really bad now!
i used to think i was a good writer but now i just suck.
if people could read some and comment on what im doing wrong i would appreciate it and ill return the favor.
thanks loads guys.

Hey I did two of them...please could you take a look at "The Jenny and Alistair poem" and "the breeze"
Many thanks

Cowgirl Cheyenne (Honky-Tonk 'ell) can you rate it too?

Please could you look at:

"The plea of the silent few"

[lostlaureate - come find me]

p.s I think the poem I read was awesome..!

wow i r/r/c on 3 of them n none of them sucked at all! gr8 work!
~*Who Cares?*~
I don't care what ones you r/r/c of mine..any of my new ones are fine