Two for three

Could you please comment and RATE my pieces of writing called 'My nightmare' and 'just another crowd'. And ill do the same for three of yours, just leave the ones you wish.

Will do. Umm could u do:
My blood on his fist,
School year photo,
Obsession.

Xx

Done. I must say,your piece 'my blood on his fist' was absolutely amazing. it is such a great write that you should be really proud of.

Anyone else?

murder or suicide
precious life wasted
love is where you are

I will when I get home from school if I don't have time before. Please read and RATE my lyrics:
Cowgirl Cheyenne (Honky-Tonk 'ell)
He came from Wyoming

Done. I really enjoyed reading Cowgirl Cheyenne. The vibe i got from it was amazing.