Mother's Day Poetry Contest

  • Synh
    18 years ago

    Rules:
    1. No pre-written work
    2. No abcb poem
    (ex. roses are red
    violets are blue
    candy's sweet
    and so are you)
    3. No more than 20 lines (5 stanzas)
    4. Must be HAPPY. No 'I hate mother's day' stuff
    5. Has to be written about some female you're related/know (mother, sister, cousin, friend etc.)

    Prizes:
    1st. Comment/Vote 8 poems
    2nd. Commnet/Vote 4 poems
    3rd. Comment/Vote 2 poems

    Get started ^^ contest ends 5.13.06

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    Grandma

    Hello Grandma
    It's me again
    I love you, Grandma
    My love for you will never end

    Grandma, please smile and think of me when I'm away
    Have a wonderful time and a great mother's day
    I love you, grandma; I just turned 13
    I can't always be a baby, but you can always love me

    Grandma, please eat lots of delicious food
    The time I spend with you always makes me feel good
    Grandma, I promise I'll give you a present
    But for now I can just give you a letter of love

    Grandma, thanks for being alive
    Live very long
    Grandma, I admire you
    You're so stubborn and strong

    You've survived more than 80 years (that's very long)

    Grandma, I'll miss you
    Talk to you soon
    I want you to know I'll always love you

  • swill
    18 years ago


    _____Mother_____
    __________________________________
    The clock has always been so alive
    But let me recall the moments past
    It wasn`t the air that made me survive
    You were the reason why I could last

    You`d hold me tight until I fell asleep
    And if the mattress would dare turn wet
    Into the dampness you`d slowly creep
    And I`d be dry on your side of the bed

    Can you recall your beloved amethyst robe?
    The wintry day when I had a runny nose
    There were no tissues in the wardrobe
    Your dress wiped it, then you held me close

    Sometimes I`d sleep in the rose-pink cot
    And you`d sing to me till the moon had sunk
    Same lullaby your weary mind had thought
    But I`d stare with eyes that never shrunk

    Those dusks in the park when I wanted to swing
    And you`d push, because my legs couldn`t reach
    I`d shout with joy, and I`d feel like a king
    You`d keep pushing, though feverish and weak

    You were the one who taught me to walk
    To button my shirt and tie my shoes
    We must open doors only after a knock
    When the road forks, we must wisely choose

    I`d come crying when I`d skin my knee
    And you would wipe the tears off my face
    Never have I seen and never will I see
    Love, greater than the warmth of your embrace

    Your love cannot be overridden by any god
    The love that I know I can never repay
    Any attempt I make, I know will have flawed
    Because I love you more than three words can say...
    _____________________________________
    Dhaval 2006.
    I Love My Mom