English Memorie Poem----HELP

ok my assignment fo english is to take one of my memories and either write a memoir or a poem about it. i have a really bad memory(like REALLY bad) and i dont remeber alot of happy (or sad) moments in my life. she said that if we couldnt think of something to use 9/11..(what we were doing, where we were, how we found out etc..) but to tell the truth i dont even remember that!!!! i want to use my one poem entitled My Broken Home.. (changing the one line with the swear word) but am not sure if i should.. i mean its kinda emotional and painful. if you could read it and tell me if you think i should use it i would really appreciate it!!!! (and no this isnt a scam for comments or ratings!! )))

Thankies!!!!

--ps.. i need to know by sunday night b/c its due on monday..... (:

darn- i forgot to put an 's' on memories!!!!! lol

oh wow...
that was a powerful poem. if you're comfortable with showing this to your class and teacher, you should definately turn it in.
but otherwise, if you don't feel comfortable, maybe you could make up a happy poem.
it's whatever you feel is right.
...sorry if i didn't help much. but this is really your choice, no one can decide it for you.
Lauren

im still not aure so i wrote a poem about my grandmother 'Nanny' dying. its really sad.. i dont know which i should use....
grrr...
any other help?

well..
like i said, you can make up a happy poem. if you don't want people to see the sad side of you.
but i'm sure whatever you choose, it'll be wonderful. because you're an amazing writer.

aww thankies!!!!
BTW i love your name........

:D

xoxo

Lauren

yeah,
Lauren's are pretty pimptastical =]

Hey thanx for the help with it! i like how you changed it alot more than mine, i wrote it when i first started writing and never really got around to fixing it up, which i was going to do when i posted it..but oh well. but i do have to take you the F*Bomb as my teacher calls it, thtat the only swear word we can't use, if you have any quick suggestions that would be great, and one more thing- should i use this one or my one called "Nightmare Come Alive'. i had actually written that one (NCA) after getting the assignment because i wasn't really sure i should use 'My Broken Home'.. Thanxx!!!!

xoxo

Lauren

Come On..... GRRR