C for C LOVE YA!!!!!

Please help me out with my new poem called "one Night". I really need some input. I will return the favor by commenting and rating your as well. And if you feel the urge please r/r/c on any of my other poems, I will also match those. I will love you forever !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love always
*ASHLEY*