BIGGEST CONTEST OF THEM ALL!!! (great rewards)

~*~*~*~CoNtEsT ClOsEd~*~*~*~

This is the biggest contest that is being held AT THE MOMENT!!! From the 40 titles below you must choose ONE and ONLY one. The prizes will go from 1st all the way to 10th. More than anyone else.

1st Place ----> 10 Comments/Rates and Add to Faves
2nd Place----> 7 Comments/Rates and Add to Faves
3rd Place----> 5 Comments/Rates and Add to Faves
4-6th place--> 3 Comments/Rates
7-10th Place> 2 Comments and Rates

~*~Rules~*~
+One entry per person
+Title must be one of the choices below and must be relevant to the poem
+The poem can be any type, Sad, Love, Nature, etc.
+NO PROFANITY
+YOU CAN MANIPULATE A TITLE A LITTLE BIT!!!
+and you must have Fun

~*~Titles~*~
1. Why can't you see -TAKEN
2. Perfect -TAKEN
3. Simple -Available
4. My Aching Heart -ReSeRvEd
5. Hero -TAKEN
6. SOS -TAKEN
7. Bad Day -TAKEN
8. Over my head -Available
9. Unwritten -Available
10. Sorry -Available
11. Walking Away -Available
12. Moving on -TAKEN
13. What hurts the most -TAKEN
14. Enough Crying -TAKEN
15. Out of control -TAKEN
16. Why -TAKEN
17. As time goes by -TAKEN
18. The way things were -TAKEN
19. Staying Alive -Available
20. Somewhere -Available
21. Nothing -TAKEN
22. Unchained Melody -TAKEN
23. America -TAKEN
24. Wishing on a star -Available
25. Lady Luck -TAKEN
26. Summertime -Available
27. Fly Away -TAKEN
28. Happy? -TAKEN
29. Forever and Always -Available
30. Where we belong -Available
31. Easy -Available
32. Come what may -TAKEN
33. Summer Nights -TAKEN
34. Lose Yourself -Available
35. Crazy -TAKEN
36. Can't Stop -TAKEN
37. Thank You -TAKEN
38. Its only love -TAKEN
39. I'll be there -TAKEN
40. How do I live -TAKEN

HAVE FUN AND GOODLUCK!!!

DeadLine is MAY 30th!!!
or until 30 poems are posted.

COUNTDOWN

2 DAYS!!!

OR

5 More Poems!!!

Bad Day
By: ~*Who Cares?*~

I feel that I should tell you of my day,
Because today the sky was extra gray.
Nothing went right, everything was wrong,
The day just was bad all along.

So I woke up today, and I felt bad,
My nose was all stuffy, and it made me sad.
I was going to see my mom, but I felt so sick,
So I popped in some pills to get better quick.

Well, my mom arrived, and we went to have fun,
As we drove to the beach with little caution.
We drove over mountains so windy and long,
Making me so sick, while the radio played the DUMBEST song.

We got to the beach, but she wanted to know what was ahead,
So we kept going, so we could be fed.
We got so lost, it wasn't even funny,
With nothing but the clothes on our backs and some money.

After an hour of being lost we finally found,
A place to eat, with many people abound.
Once we ate, we got back on the road,
Back to the beach, but my head felt like it were to explode!

We arrived at the beach, yet we were in jeans,
And all the people were old, no hot teens!
So, we got in the water and splashed around,
We had so much fun until I fell to the ground.

As we walked back, to where my mom lay,
A bee stung my foot, which is NOT ok!
I took out the stinger, and then my foot swelled,
I walked to the car, as each step I yelled.

So then I came home, and since it's mother's day,
My step mom came over, and they had so much to say.
They were over here for 4 hours straight,
In that amount of time, I could've gone on a date.

But now the day's finally over, I'm bored and in pain,
My nose is still stuffy, and my foot look inhumane!
This was my day, completely true,
Would I EVER lie to you?

Thank You, Mum

__________________________________
The clock has always been so alive
But let me recall the moments past
It wasn`t the air that made me survive
You were the reason why I could last

You`d hold me tight until I fell asleep
And if the mattress would dare turn wet
Into the dampness you`d slowly creep
And I`d be dry on your side of the bed

Can you recall your beloved amethyst robe?
The wintry day when I had a runny nose
There were no tissues in the wardrobe
Your dress wiped it, then you held me close

Sometimes I`d sleep in the rose-pink cot
And you`d sing to me till the moon had sunk
Same lullaby your weary mind had thought
But I`d stare with eyes that never shrunk

Those dusks in the park when I wanted to swing
And you`d push, because my legs couldn`t reach
I`d shout with joy, and I`d feel like a king
You`d keep pushing, though feverish and weak

You were the one who taught me to walk
To button my shirt and tie my shoes
We must open doors only after a knock
When the road forks, we must wisely choose

I`d come crying when I`d skin my knee
And you would wipe the tears off my face
Never have I seen and never will I see
Love, greater than the warmth of your embrace

Your love cannot be overridden by any god
The love that I know I can never repay
Any attempt I make, I know will have flawed
Because I love you more than three words can say...
_____________________________________
Dhaval 2006.
I Love My Mom

#17 As Time Goes By
-------------------------
As Time Goes By

Sitting here
As time goes by
Playing my guitar
When I know I'm about to die

I have but one week
That is what they say
I sit and write all day
And hope to become recognized

This girl I know
Comes and goes
Asks me, why?
Why I just sit and play

Why, oh why?
when I know I'm going to die
It is simple I reply
This is my life

This is what I love
I have no family
Friends or pets
It is just me and my guitar

I sit and play
Till the sun goes down
Drink and write
Till the sun comes up

I have but 2 days left
And I finally want to go
Have some fun
The ladies sit and watch all day

Applaud me
And say they want more
I produce as fast as possible
But, I am dieing...

And want no more
All I want is to hear me music
Hear it on the Radio
Hear it in my heart

Oh wait...
I hear music
I hear it in my heart
I am now in heaven

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

-Enough Crying-

I have had enough
I cant take this pain anymore

I have had enough crying
Enough salty tears
Enough throbbing heartbreak

My love for you
Will in time
Fade away..

If only I could
Wait that long..

I have had enough crying
But I believe that
For your love
I will cry
I will cry every night
And every day
If only I can
Have your love..
______________________

hehe..i hope you like it.. :)
jessy xox

~The Way Things Were~

A relationship bound by the court,
two parents yearning to abort.
One child's postpartum deport,
a life, from the start, out of sorts.

The help of two elders, they sought,
a custody battle, never fought.
Drug addict parents, got caught,
important lessons, never taught.

A baby that was left behind,
consequences of a legal bind.
A lifestyle of a different kind,
viewpoints from a distorted mind.

A family separated by years in time,
a life with a different rhythm and rhyme.
Two people, making up for another's crime,
always living off of their last dime.

A difficult situation from the start,
a unique picture, of an unpopular art.
A family, nearly torn apart,
two grandparents, certainly, off the charts.

An unwanted boy, now full grown,
held together by seams, left un-sewn.
Approaching life with a whole different tone,
hoping, some day, to live life on his own.

~Sean Dohr~

27. Fly away

I know we have our differences,
and we do not always agree.
I know I said I loved you,
but you have to set me free.

Free me from this pain,
Save me from theese tears.
Save me from my darknessed soul,
Save me from my fears.

I said I love you, and I do,
but this is not our fate,
I won't be here in this world,
filled with pain and hate.

Free me from this cage of horror,
Even thought you want me here,
Let me past theese dark, heavy clouds,
let me se the sky so clear.

Let me out of this awful pain,
Let me leave today,
Let me say goodbye to you,
Let me fly away.

#16 Why?
By david Marshall

What am I suppose to feel,
I don't know anymore.
Is this for real?
What's this happening for?

Why can't I get you out of my head?
Why can't I move on?
I love you, nothing else to be said,
Why can't my sorrow be gone?

For me, things seem to be going wrong.
I said I'd love you forever,
Is that too long?

Do you not realize?
Do you not care?
Do you not see the tears in my eyes?
This life isn't fair.

Why can't I just forget?
Why can't I let you go?
I put my life through hell,
Why do I love you so?

Why must I feel this way?
Your always on my mind.
I love you more everyday,
more than my life and the world combined.

Why do I smile when I see your face,
When I know you hurt me.
Why do I give you all my grace,
When my pain you never see.

Why do i put myself through the same stuff everyday?
Why does it feel like it's me you always betray?

Why do I bother?
Why do I try?
I guess I'll love you until the day I die.

I still love you and always will.
But you make me cry.
And I'll always ask myself.....Why?

GREAT POEMS EVERYONE!! Bout 1/3 of the way through

I'll be there (#39)

If you ever feel lonely
And you need a friend
You can call my name and
I'll be there till the end

Because no matter how hard you fall
I'll be sure to catch you when you hit the wall
(Cause I'll be there)

And if you want to go missing
And need to run away
You can always come back to me
Because I'm here to stay

If you want someone to hold on
You can grab on tight and keep your grip on me
(I'll be there forever)

And if you need some stories
You can hear them from me
I'll tell you all you want to hear
And draw out your dreams

If you want a friend who will never scold you
I'll tell you that I've never told someone, "I told you"
(Be there forever close to you)

If you want me to save you
From the pain in the world
I'll help you recover
But I can't promise it won't hurt

I know you care too
You know I love you
I'll always need you
I'll always be there

Next to you (Next to you)
In your arms, in your heart, in your mind
I'll be wherever you find you need help
Because I'll be there

For all of your life
I'll always be there

Come on guys, we're getting there only 14 days left

~~what hurts the most~~

Sometimes i wonder if the pain will go away,
the pain of that unforgetable day.

i tried so hard to hold onto you.
we were ment to be,
i tried so hard to see it through.
but i guess i was just to blind to see.

i wasnt aware of the pain you felt.
wasnt aware of the hurt i dealt.

For once i thought i found true love,
then i had to go and screw it all up.
Now all i listen to are broken hearted songs,
cause i messed it up and its all wrong.

so i guess it couldnt get worse than this,
cause now i just sit around and miss,
what we had,
what could have been,
what went bad,
and what should have been.

now all i do is cry,
& try to keep the pain inside.
cause what hurts the most,
is losing the one that ment the most...

by: molly :)

Can't Stop.

Can't stop, Won't stop,
Break it down to the floor.
Make it pop, Make it drop,
I'm back to give you more.

Now just bring it up slow,
Wanna see you get low.
Fella's wanna holla,
And we gon' let them know.

We came to party,
Have a good time.
Don't try that line,
You're worth a dime.

Can't stop, Won't stop,
Break it down to the floor.
Make it pop, Make it drop,
I'm back to give you more.

Rewind that track,
Bring it on back.
Put it on repeat,
Ladies get out yo' seat.

We came to dance,
And do our thang.
Fella's tryna holla,
We'll see what tonight brings.

Can't stop, Won't stop,
Break it down to the floor.
Make it pop, Make it drop,
I'm back to give you more.

..Eh..That 'Can't Stop' Just remined me of dancing or something. Pretty bad poem. But I wanted to try something new. =] Hope you like it.

`taleee xx

S.O.S

Im saying that im scared
im saying someone help me
im saying i cant cope
but no one understands

i cry myself to sleep
i miss you all so bad
I want to tell somebody
but no one understands

i need a helicopter
or a rescue plane
to fly in here and save me
but no one understands

i want someone to love me
to put their arm around me
to say that it'll be okay,
but noone understands.

i dont know how to tell them
why should i try at all
its best to keep it hidden
because noone understands.

I reserve "Nothing" and will write the poem tonight

#5 Hero -....I changed it to My Hero

~My Hero~

Crying so in the night
I experienced a broken heart.
Never thought the sun will shine
Until you came to me and showed
Me the light.

You showed me
How it feels to hope
You looked into my eyes
And told me no lies.

My hero you are
You saved my soul
My heart thanks you
For all your loving words.

You held me in your arms
And smiled down at me
After all I did
You still want to be
My hero.

You gave me my first rose
You showed me respect
You never once cussed at me
Or told me
Hurtful words.

You are my hero
My ever lasting love
No words can describe
Of how you saved my life.

I am sorry I pushed you away
I am sorry I did not pick you
You are my one and only
You are a person who is
My hero.

Great poems everyone. only 13 days left.

Nothing

Eyes wide open
in the darkest place.
"This is not where I am" I say
to myself.

Yet I know I am mistaken.

This is destroying me.

"It was nothing"

she says "only a dream

"If dreams were only dreams"
I whisper "I would never..."

My own sense silences me
as she gently falls asleep.

And as the night wanes
and is closing,
I close my eyes and feel nothing

13 days or 16 poems, lets keep it going guys

tralala takes SO long! ahhhhhh o well i can wait...

Im dying of antisipation

Happy?
_________________________

I sit here and cry,
Eyes blood shot red,
And you think I'm happy?

I sit alone
Not able to talk to anyone
And you think I'm happy?

Secrets still untold
You see it in my eyes
And you think I'm happy?

I cry myself to sleep
Huge black lines under my eyes
And you think I'm happy?

I just lost my mom
She died in a car crash
And you think I'm happy?

I am now living with my Dad
He yells and hits me for no reason
And you think I'm happy?

Look at all the signs
Is it that hard to tell
That I am far from happy?

15 POEMS

OR

12 MORE DAYS TILL CONTEST ENDS!!!

Come on guys, there are some good titles up here.

Why can't you see?
by Latasha

I never knew I'd be gone so soon,
Unable to fight back to your cruel ways,
No one ever seen this coming,
I was defenseless...

Why can't you see?
My cries were only for attention,
I never realized it would bring me to my death,
Powerless to the hands of my father,
Today I lay helpless...

I always thought you loved me,
Maybe my beliefs were misunderstood,
Your hands wondered on my body,
No way to prevent all this pain...

I never thought it would end up like this,
My tattered body is now at rest,
Maybe I was stupid,
For having faith when you said,"I'll never hurt you."

Always so frail,
Never knowing what to expect,
Praying each day would be different,
Unable to see nothing could change...

Why can't you see?
My love for you never faded,
I never thought I was selfish,
Nor did I ever dream of dying in your arms,
But today I lay helpless

There's another. We're getting there

13. What hurts the most

Can you please?
Can you please show me?
Can you please show me your smile when you did before?

It is too hard
It is too hard to see your smile
It is too hard to see your smile when my tears cover it

Maybe Id rather
Maybe Id rather bear myself
Maybe Id rather bear myself not to see you again

Do not smile
Do not smile like the old days
Do not smile like the old days when we smiled together

But
But why my heart doesnt accept?
But why my heart doesnt accept my order?

Please just
Please just turn to my side
Please just turn to my side where you used to come

I miss you
I miss you so much that I am going to die
I miss you so much that I am going to die of loneness

You
You are the only one
You are the only one who can give me a real reason for living

Unchained Melody
By: Poonam

sleep in my soft bed
i awake to the melody
unchained, unfettered
by the news of the world

safe and naive that music
calls to mind natures
calmest singing sounds
free from all corruption

the twinkling of teh stars
the babbling of the brook
the shimmering singing rays
from both the sun and moon

the music is yet free sang
but the driads of the trees
away from the violence
that tears the world asunder

Lady Luck
By: Kim

Lady Luck, she dresses in drag
Heavy mascara smeared by the rain
Carrying coins in her tattered old bag
Dispensing chance with profitable gain

Her bright lipstick is a little too tilted
Her heels just a little too high
Her speech is a little too stilted
And most people would rather walk by

Yet she smiles with eyes of pure glee
And gives luck to those who care
She holds, to fortune, the key
For those who'll acknowledge she's there

Lady Luck, she dresses in drag
And only the compassionate notice her going
Wearing a dress, starting to sag
Most people walk by without knowing

hurry people and submit, i read the vast majority of these poems and they are all written great! I am curious to as who will win...

only 11 more poems

Some great poems guys!!

9 MORE DAYS

or 11 MORE POEMS!!

9 days people, nine days

2- Perfect
__________
Not So Perfect.

Long black hair, to cover my shoulders.
Bright blue eyes, to look at you with.
Perfect skin and a perfect face.
Accompanied by the perfect fake life.

The perfect long sleeved shirts.
To hide my perfectly placed scars.
To cover my perfectly cut, cuts.
To keep my already warm skin warmer.

The perfect smiles upon my perfect face.
A perfect frown to fit my real sadness.
The fake happy life I live.
A perfect tear sliding down my cheek.

The perfect drops of blood.
That splatter across my room
With each perfect incision on my wrists.
Laying my perfect body on my bed.

I lay there, slowly dieing.
Dripping my perfect blood on my white bed.
Losing all feeling becoming limp and lifeless.
No more faking no more perfectness.

Truthfully, I was not perfect
No one is perfect.
And for the people who thought I was.
Can you see now how imperfect I actually am?

My perfect soul is now at peace.
Just a perfect body strewn neatly across her bed.
Followed by the last drop of blood.
Slowly dripping to the floor.

7 days or 10 poems

ahh this takes 4ever!!!! :(

40. How do I live?

How do I live?
I live an a place where darkness creeps
I can’t keep this up
I hope that one day I will be happy
How do I live?

I live in shadows
I live and hide
My thoughts and feelings always keeping me confined
Crying and whining
Cutting and screaming
Playing and praying
How do I live?

I live in a place a place for my head
I live in my world a world full of hope
How do I live?
I live in a place where the darkness speaks
I come to a place where hope lies to me
How do I live?

I live in a world I hate
I live in a world that makes me cry
I live in a world that tells me lies
I live in a world that hurts me
I live in a world that tears me apart
I live in a world that you could say kills me fast
How do I live?

How do I live?
Once again you ask me
How do I live?
I live in pain
That is how I live

35. Crazy

Im Crazy For You,
Like You Have Always Known,
I Can Feel You,
When You Walk In,
Your Energy,
Your Exciment

Im Crazy For You,
I Want To Hunt You Down,
Then Your All Mine,
I Dont Want To Share You,
Your Too Good For Sharing,

Im Crazy And I Know It,
I Go Nuts Round You,
I Know You Think Im Crazy
But Im Crazy Just For You

yes go ahead

#33 SummerNights

Tis the time for radiant gowns
For women to flaunt around
Sparkling wine kisses lips
Toppling to the ground

Tis the time to find a man
To reveal the world to you
To hold your hand gently in his
And Show you what he's knew

Tis the time to smile in glee
Letting worries fly away
Enjoy the air of vanilla musk
Dance till night hits day

Summernights of warm embraces
Under the glowing midnight moon
Whispering, giggling all in rapture
Hoping to see each other soon

Ah yes, I remember even now
That star within his eye
Then when the night faded away
He left me a silent cry

From that night, I seek forever
That man of fearless charm
To have him kiss me passionately
Taking me inside his arms

this takes 4evr n evr n evr..ahhhh omg..lol