new poem

Hi,
have written a new poem called "if i should die tomorrow" would love it if you could find the time to comment on it and any other's you wish.
will return the favour asap
xxx
love Tara-Kay

My new one please, "Wandering Soul"

hehe.. that was a very sweet poem! i loved it :) keep it up! um..could you please do my new poem "Together, forever, we shall lay.." thnnxy!
lotsa love!
jessy xox