ReQuEsTiNg InPuT oN a FeW pOeMs

plz take a look at a few of my poems
"Stuck on repeat"
"The Silver Demon"
"When Blue Fades To Grey"
and
"Why Do I Still Care?"

I would really like some feedback on these poems especially the last one.. tell me what you think.. I will return the favor.. thanx a lot :)

i will go read a few

Any of my featured please

i did the first three! they were excellent! :D keep up the amaaziing work and never stop writing! would you please just take a look at my latest poems please?
thnxx alot!
-jessy-