That Time Of Year

New poem, sad and fairly graphic ( I think).

It's quite personal to me, but I would like feedback. The more critical the better!! (By critical I mean constructive critisism)

I'll comment two of yours in return. I promise!
Just leave the titles!

Done. =]

Could you please do;
`Falling Apart.
`I'll Be Fine.

Thanks.

`taleeee xx

Thanks taleeee

I've commented on those two poems!

Anyone else?

Done.

If you could do "Soldier"
And Then Anyone of my Other Featured ones.
I'd be overly happy.

Thanks, Ahead of time.

Thanks for the comment, I've done two of yours.

Anyone else?

Either of my three newest ones. Not picky just pick two of them if you can.

fantatic peice.

if you could look at "The Bi-Polar curse" and whichever other you like i would be most greatful

Thanks Kaylee and master of shadow. I've returned the favour plus one to both of you.

Anyone else?

Thanks MY1&only
I've done the two of yours that you requested.

Anyone else?