80's Song Lyrics (not your typical lyrics title contest ;) )

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The Winners are.....

1st)Bed of Roses by Just Rain
2nd)Nothing else matters by --MaZe--
3rd)Don't Treat Me Bad [Song] by Brianna
4th)Nobodys Fool. by ``[&&];;its>>TaLe3e♥.x.
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Comments:
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+Bed of Roses by Just Rain:
Very 80's... really liked it... the "sweet symphony" haha... you definatly did youre homework

+Nothing else matters by --MaZe--:
Great Poem.. really.. but it didnt have much of an 80's feel...

+Nobodys Fool. by ``[&&];;its>>TaLe3e♥.x.:
Nice try... really lacking the feel im looking for...
and btw..
you say the person is nobodys fool..
yet you are portaying them to be just that......

+Don't Treat Me Bad [Song] by Brianna
Not too shaby....
Would have liked a more 80's twist but I guess I cant expect yall to be able to write a style that youve prolly never even heard

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PRIZES:

1st-20 Comments&Votes and a Favorites spot
2nd-10 Comments&Votes (maybe a favorites)
3rd-5 Comments&Votes
4th-4 Comments&Votes
5th-3 Comments&Votes
6th-2 Comments&Votes
7th-1 Comment&Vote

Bump ;)

Good luck. O_o..

20 comments and votes people! who wouldn't want that!!

*has never been in the 80's*

we might as well give it a shot ;)

omg... (has just listened to Sweet Cherry Pie on youtube)

i'll be back later...

but these songs are AWESOME!!

Bed of Roses

I fell asleep on a bed of roses
Woke up with thorns shot in my skin
I almost cried waiting for tomorrow
It seems on this side I'll never win

Sweet symphony, I can't hear you anymore
Endless thoughts of me, I'll drown you out for sure
Can't stand waitin' on this side of the line
Honey if you're really here, stay for the ride

I can't wait to see you
I wanna meet you again
I saw you last night
I woke up on a rose filled bed

I miss you a lot, but you ain't really here
I had a dream of you, but when I woke you weren't here
I fall asleep wishing you were next to me, baby
I found your number in the yearbook and it was disconnected

Baby if you're really here, dump a ton of roses
All over my bed so I know you're really here
And if you truly love me, let them be red
I want to know you still care

So if I wake up to a bed of roses
And they just happen to be red
I'll love you times a billion
I won't have any regrets

My sheets with a heaven scent
My life being duly spent
I want to see you every day
So if you come, you better stay

A bed of roses... (red...)
A smell of heaven... (from an angel)
Thorns running up my veins (all the pain in the world)
I'd do anything for you (no matter how bad it hurts)

Very 80's :D keep em comin'!!!!

Bump ;)

yay! :) come on people... you know u wanna try ;)

cmon people, are ya gonna give up ur chance that easily??? you have 2 more days... if no one posts another song within two days (by 5/29) I will close this contest and Just Rain will automatically win.

hehe... if no one enters ill win ;)

lmao... come on people... there's a lot of places to win. you know you want to enter.. it doesn't have to make sense, just have the feel and the title... :)

I'll try and do one. ..Doubt it will be good. Taha..

Nobodys Fool.

[Verse 1]
You hide behind your wall,
Just waiting for the fall.
You lift yourself higher,
To reveal the liar.
You dance your blues away,
Till someone stops you to say.

[Chorus]
You're nobodys fool,
They see right through you.
Doesn't matter how hard you try.
You can't hide forever,
Doesn't matter what you do.
You're nobodys fool.

[Verse 2]
You cover up your eyes,
So they can't see your lies.
You bring yourself around,
So they don't know you're down.
You sing your favourite song,
Still, They know this all along.

[Chorus]
You're nobodys fool,
They see right through you.
Doesn't matter how hard you try.
You can't hide forever,
Doesn't matter what you do.
You're nobodys fool.

[Verse 3]
You breathe in and breathe out,
Still, You let out a pout.
With a sigh of relief,
You give in to belief.
All along you knew who's right,
That little voice in the night.

[Chorus]
You're nobodys fool,
They see right through you.
Doesn't matter how hard you try.
You can't hide forever,
Doesn't matter what you do.
You're nobodys fool.

..wow.. That was badddd ..Taha.. I don't think it sounds 80's like.. Ohwell...

cmon people!! keep em comin!!!

yay ;) thanks for entering.

I know it might be hard, but im sure yall can do it!! can I at least have a few more????

if i can get 3 more, ill judge them.

wow... 19 posts ;) thanks, everyone, for entering.

so... when u going 2 judge?

**just rain has changed to HeartzOnIce

If I dont get anymore entries by tomorrow, ill close this and judge.....

ok.. sorry I havnt been around, Ive been really busy working, I worked 12 hours yesterday and really need some rest... but Ill post the winners asap.. definatly by Sunday night.

Thanx to everyone who enterd. sorry this didnt have a bigger turn out. guess you all were a bit too young for this one lol.. anyways.. I'll keep you all posted!!

pls take a huuuge nap! i don't like working straight either (school finals are very stressful) but i curl up to a nice comic book and relax for a bit. thank you for judging :)

K... winners are posted... all prizes will be given within a week.. thanks for playing...

thank you! :) i wish more people could've entered. sadly, everyone seems to like the music NOW and not even care of those back then :) your contest was a reminder not to forget the other music. ty

wow. that's a lotta R/C/V's. thanks again :)

Woo. Thank you =] Congratulations to the other winners. ^_^ They were great songs.

ditto! :) Thankies.

hey... did u ever give me my prize? :( please give me my prize when ur done resting...