Young Poets should stand up.

Young Poets should stand up.
By: sfiawong

After sweetly rests for an evening,
Gets up thought wants you to come,
Wants quite happily,
After thorough arrangement.

Looked like is the free verse written in the vernacular expert,
Greece can read this kind of poem,
Adds many spot diligently.

Diligently will not be able to waste,
Perhaps is the free verse written in the vernacular hoped,
Please writes 1. attempts.

Excavates your real talent,
That like my dissimilarity,
You are in the poem expensive treasure,
Does not need to suspect you from your own inspiration,
Since is waiting for,
That should be more than plans.

Everybody was anticipating,
Anticipation your good poem,
The cultural desert is hopeful.

Hoped the new youth person stands up,
I came also,
The multi- people have also come,
Long road endless,
Many people have come,
Turn to you!
Cannot want oh!

Note: I wish you come to take a patronage to read my poetry art works. You may get some hints to write a better pieces of your own My Dear Member/Friend!

Hmm, the language of your poem, and the context of this thread leave me to believe you are a professor or educator of some sort? Or has age and wisdom blessed you?

I'm not saying your old, I'm saying this level of read is beyond average youth. However, I will not underestimate the potential of our
youngsters.

Hi, Darien,

You are right, I am really an old Chinese man, this poem has been admired by some other members in other webiste said it seemed created like an old Chinese poem by a famous group poetry parties.

Those group of poetry parties were the leaders of poetry in a period of literature history. I can edit it a little bit, if you don't like the form of partial sentences, which I know many people do not understand too like you do, but I want you can enjoy my works by pointing to my name which will lead you to my art works.

Thank you, young fellow!

Hello my friend,

This poem is fine the way it is, and should not be changed at all. I do understand the poem, and every point made in it. However, the youth may not. I read alot, and not just casual reading of poetry and magazines like most teenages, but books, novels, newspapers and other sorts of material. I comprehend what you write, and I have read about poetry parties as well. This is an excellent piece, however, not many of our youth would appreciate it, and it is indeed very sad.

Thank you for this poem, a very good inspiration