New Poem "Dessert Before Dinner"

Hey everyone,

I wrote a new poem called "Dessert Before Dinner", just wondering if you wanted to check it out. For those of you that r/r/c I will return the favour on 3 of your poems. That's right! 1 of mine for 3 of yours.

I always return the favour : )
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I r/r/c on your poem lol...very very interesting...made me really hungry hehe lol great job!! could you please r/r/c on any of my poems that barely have any comments please!! it would be greatly appreciated!!

Thanks.. I read your poems, and they were good.

anyone else?