COMMENTS ANYONE?!?!

Hey, first of all id like to thank everyone who voted/commented all of my previous poems, your thoughts were well appreciated :)

I wrote a couple poems and i'd like to know what you guys think about them... they are different then my older poems, i think. i really would appreciate any feedback... so please comment/rate my three featured poems... and while your at it, check out any of my older ones if you like.

All comments will be returned and doubled... if you comment 2 of mine... i'll comment 4 of yours...if you comment 3 or mine... i'll comment 6 of yours...not just one liner comments either... feel free to comment any of mine but i'd like to know what people think about my featured ones.

Leave any titles here or just say "any poems of mine" or something. thanks :) -jen-

"Vulnerable", "Ego", "The Man Who Won't Wake", and "You fool".

I shall read two of your poems.

Thanks
Steve

thanx... anyone else?

I did one. =]

Could you please do;
`Falling Apart
&&
`Broken Memories.

Thanks.

`taleee xx

there you go! :) i did 4, could you please do ::

1. A cold black night
2. My soul has been destroyed
3. A precious life was created..
4. Together, forever, we shall lay..
5. A journey..
6. I need to let these emotions out..
7. Just like heaven..
8. Key to my heart

thankk you! :D
jessy xox

taleee... i have already previously commented on broken memories.... pick another one if you want.

done... anyone else?

Hey I did it! Could you please do my newest poem "Just Another Day" Thanks!