-Just like heaven- 1 for 2

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    Would you please r/r/c my new poems ::

    1. "Why do the ones we love have to die?"

    AND/OR

    2. "Eyes like fire"

    AND/OR

    3. "Just like heaven"

    Please feel free to do any others :)

    I will double any amount that you comment on, for example:

    1=2
    2=4
    3=6
    4=8
    5=10

    Thank youuu! xox

  • Emma
    19 years ago

    okay...i want to do two for four....
    Read any of my new or feautured poems thanks...
    Emma

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Ooh. I did one for now. =] I'll do some morrre later kay?

    Could you please do;
    `Let The Waves Crash Down [Lyrics]
    &&
    `I'm Lost Without You [Lyrics]

    Thanks oh so verrry much =P

    `taleeee xx

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    thank you both! Emma done with yours (great poems!) going to do yours now taleeee! :)

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    all done taleeee! amazing songs! you should really be a song writer!

    anyone else?

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Oooh. Thanks, I hearted your comments tehe.

  • Meggie33
    19 years ago

    I did one, it was amazing, great job! i will be sure to do more later, the only problem with finding something to comment on, was that i've already commented on a lot of your work, but dont worry ill manage to find more later!

    **meggie**

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    aww, meggie, your soo sweet! :) thanks for the lovely comment and all your others! gonna go do two for now and then im gonna go to sleep.. :P

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go! :)

    anyone else? ill do them sometime tomorrow, going to sleep now :P

    hope there's lotsa requests when i check back.. teehee!

  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Left comments on "Just like Heaven", "A cold black night", "Together, forever, we shall lay.." and "I need to let these emotions out..". Good write.

    J. Lau

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    thank youu! at school right now, will do yours when i get home! :)

    anyone else?

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    all done J. Lau! very nice poems! 5/5! lovely maze, loved them!

    anyone else? :)

  • Jennifer
    19 years ago

    There I did Just like Heaven, it was great, ur really good at writing poetry, Would you plz read my new one Dear God, and I guess one of my featured ones, thanx.
    always jennifer

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go! :) nice poems!

    anyone wanna comment on "Eyes like fire" ?

  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    Hey I'll comment on it!! Please do my newest one "Just Another Day" Thanks!

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I did it =P Tehe..

    Could you please do my newest one. [I entered it in the same contest you entered Eyes Like Fire =P] It's called 'Forgive And Forget' Thanks sooo much.

    `taleee xx

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    thank you so much! :D done yours bridgette! going to do your new one now taleee! :P

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go taleee! very nice, very complicated! :P thank you again! xox

    anyone else?

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol.. Thanks. And its okayyyy =P

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    anyone elsee? anyone at all? :)

  • Ye Seul
    19 years ago

    go on people!!

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I did another one. =] Any of my new ones are fine. =P

    `taleee xx

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go taleee! thank you! :D

    c'mon people? please?

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    anyone at all? i'll be back in a couple of hours, i hope there's lots of requests! :)

  • Felix
    19 years ago

    hey ill do urs
    u can do any of my two
    preferably sum of my newer ones
    tanx
    xoxox

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    heyy.. thanks for your comments! :) i did both of your poems, they were pretty good!

    anyone wanna read::

    "Why do the ones we love have to die?"

    it would mean alot to me.. please do! :)