Dark and depression poems. please rate come in board for excerpt

Please come read/rate/comment on my poems. here are excerpts from 2 of them:

"Why hold the memories dear
of another worthless year
screaming to be saved
but no one seems to hear" -first stanza of Abused

"I thought it was so good
but maybe I misunderstood
show me that you still love me
cuz this crap is killing me" -last 4 lines of Dying Inside

I did Abused.

It would mean sooo much to me if you could do 'Forgive And Forget' Thanks heaps if you do.

`taleee xx

yup i did it for u and thanx much for doing mine!

I've commented upon both the peices yuo have left examples of here.

I would appretiate it greatly if you had a look at any of mine. :)

i read some of your poems and commented on Hit the Floor. thanx for doing mine!

can u do any ofmy latest poems

i read all your latest poems and commented on We Only Meet Once

there you go! :) i did three, i think! take your pick of my poems! thanks! xox

thanx so much, and i did your poem My soul has been destroyed..