hi all little miss inviserble here

i've done some new poem and i was woundering if anyone could help me by r/r/c ing them for me. i will return the favor i promise.

i just need to know if my work need improvin or not.

thanks

p.s please i really really need the help

gemma xoxooxox

i did your latest one, it was very good! :) could you please do "Knock, knock.." thank youu! xox!