Romeo and Juliet Type Poems

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Together, forever, we shall lay..
by ..נєѕѕу..©

I know now
That I have to let you go
I have to give up
I have to just stop

These feelings
Are driving me insane
They are taking over my mind
They are taking over my brain
Shaking and shaking
Until I break down
And cry

Then when all the salty tears
Are gone
I stand up slowly
Look around
And start to scream
I scream and scream
A loud screeching shriek
Full of hate and pain
I scream this way
Until my voice is gone
And the anger is no longer present

Now all that remains
Is the depression
The heartbreak
The love..

I could not live
And see you everyday
With her..

See you holding her hand
See you stroking her hair
See you kissing her
With the lips that belonged to me..

So with one last determined look
At my tearful reflection in the mirror
I take the knife and slit my throat
The blood pours out
Just like all the pain
That had overflowed within my body..

There I lay,
Surrounded by my blood,
My pain..

You knock on the door
Calling my name
The door is open
It is not locked
You burst in,
And say
I want to be with you,
I love you,
Please forgive me..

Then you see me
You lay by my side
And scream
Noo, no, this cannot happen!
Oh, I am so sorry..
You burst out into loud relentless sobs
And then you make your final decision
You take the knife covered
With my blood
And you stick it into your heart
Forever ending your life

And as our spirits fly up above
We each take a look at our pain-free bodies
We are lying side by side
The way we should be..
Together, forever, we shall lay..
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hehe.. hope its okayy! :) tell me if its not though.. xox! btw, loved your poem, its so sweet! ^_^

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I remember a time, before I was hurt,
Before the flame of love was burnt-
out. Now I sit here and cry,
Wondering why our love had to die.

We fell in love, and were for a while,
Until my family came in, and went the extra mile,
Trying to break us up, because they didn't like you,
They didn't care about all they put me through.

They didn't like the way you dressed,
They said that of you I was obsessed.
They said you changed me, and they were right,
It's because of you, I cry at night.

If I'd never met you, I'd still be the same,
Where I was smiley and giggly, and everyone knew my name.
Now, I sit here, dying my hair darker each day,
As the sunny skies in my mind went to gray.

If I'd never met you, my dad would still love me,
My mom would have my trust, and I'd be happy.
They said you were bad to me, when you only showed love,
Made me feel like I was so much farther above.

But they took my phone, said no more he,
Blocked all ways of talking, now I talk to you rarely.
They said to never speak to you again,
To stop talking to my best friend.

Now I sit here, after 9 lonely months, thinking,
Thought my feelings for you was over, as I hide my tears by blinking.
If I'd never loved you, I could sit being happy,
But instead I write sadness, nothing sweet and sappy.

How could my family betray me, after all we been through,
I broke up with you, yet all trust and love said ado.
I broke up with you, so they'd love me again,
Yet they still don't, I lost you, and them...

~*Who Cares?*~
Erika

Hope this was good enough..if not private message me and let me know!

Romeo and Juliet

She was hooked up by one of her friends
To a guy she barely knew until they met
They talked and held hands, what people call, "Going Out"
That small beginning took a whole different route

We caught them holding hands, walking outside
I found her hugging him when the halls were quiet
I saw him kiss her near a few lockers
The thought alone was enough to drive me bonkers

It's not that I hated him; I was just a bit jealous
She only hung out with him; that thought wasn't zealous
I and her other friends were pushed to the side
I felt so alone, but my feelings did I hide

Later did I realize they were meant to be together
They were in love - they would stay that way forever
No one could change their minds
They'd be in love for all of time

For him, I no longer have harsh feelings
For her, our friendship could never be up for stealing
I care for them both very much
I don't ever want them to lose touch

One day my best friend didn't come to school
She was moving, by other friend said (not cool)
She was switching out because of her mother
She couldn't stand seeing her daughter with a lover

My best friend caused me so much worry
She made me think her dead
Reality struck upon me, it hit me in the head
But still I felt we should be sorry

I'm determined not to make this
Romeo and Juliet
I came up with a plan to fix this
I'm willing to make a bet

His and her parents will be having a meeting
In the principal's office
There's only one thing us as people can do
We have to stop this

Help them stay together, for the sake of love
Grant them that simple gift
Given by heaven above
So that their spirits lift

They'll be saved from romantic suicide
A ritual of love and death
I'll fight to let them be together
Then they can catch their breath

We have a week to keep them together
So their parents will not commit mental murder
There should never be broken hearts
And lovers shouldn't be torn apart.

so you not doing this contest then? :(

so i wrote a big old poem 4 nuthin how sad...if she dun judge this contest..ill give every1 a few r/c just for their hard work since i luv all u guys

if she dun answer by sunday ill give every1 3 comments ok?:D
much love
~*Who Cares?*~

ah cool ^^ thanks ;)

awwww..your so nice!! thank youuu! *gives biiggg hugg!*

hehe.. are you going to do it? lol.. no pressure, just wondering :)

yea im gunna do it sry my internet has been down the last few days, ill do it later on my hed hurts..i promise
much love
~*Who Cares?*~

ok im dun...most of ur guy's poems i did were old cuz ive read all ur poems b4 n like i cant r/c love/friendship poems cuz my dad blocked it...lame i kno..so like yea gr8 work every1

*hugs* thankies.

thank you!

no prob folks glad at least u guys got sum r/c:D sux we all wrote the poems 4 nuthin tho...