can somebody comment my poems please?

im sort of new at this and i would like some suggestions on my poems. they arn't very good but i would like to improve. please make suggestions. thanks.

Hey I will do it!! I'm not that good myself but I will try to help with what I can. Could you PLEASE r/r/c my newest poem "Too Late to Turn Back" It would mean alot.

I did two. Please choose any two of my poems. preferabley my newest ones. Or Soldier.
Thanks Ahead of time Hun.
♥ Megan