Only my 2nd poem

THis is only my second poem!!! please rate it............ i think i might put this one into an english project in schoool too. so please rate it and tell me what u think of it. the poem is called You.

come on guys help me out some i will comment you if you do it for me no! i will double comment

lol, okay, ill do it! :)

alright sounds like a deal ill go comment it now do any of mine you want thanks xxALLYxx