MURDER IN A WAREHOUSE

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    i have got alot of honest and positive feedback on my poem "Murder in a warehouse", but I would like it if some more of you guys could comment on it. Its one of my best poems, and i really would like more comments. I will return the favour
    xxxxx

  • Georgi
    19 years ago

    i will tara. can u please comment on my newest? xxx

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    COME ON GUYS, ITS A REALLY GOOD POEM, You'll like it. please
    xxxxx

  • ASPHYXIATED
    19 years ago

    Please do one of my newest?
    I'll do yours now :]

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    done, Lisa
    xxxx