some sort of poem

i've made a poem called "that leaf " ( ok , it starts with a title i don't even like)
i just want to know wheter it's stupid or complete nonsens
i thought quite long and hard if i would post it or not :s
it is about love actually

well, if you comment and care for one back from me, i'll do that

Ill comment it with honesty...Without reading the poem yet I don't see why you are negative about your poem. "The leaf" sounds in tune with nature.

[PygmyPuff]

I commented =)

there you go! :) could you please have a look at "Hot Summer Day" for me? thank youu!