forgotten

do you know of anybody who you used to absolutely love on here that has been forgotten??? if so post their name here and maybe they will get more attention again!

also anybody who wants to read my stuff...feel free... i really appreciate the comments and constructive critisism..- even tho i cant spell that word - haha yep.. have fun!

**meggie**

*cough*Darien*cough*

I want attention!! hahaha
No, I actually came here to bug you Meggie :P

I want attention toooooo =[ I'm bored. Lol...

omg! darien... how do you always manage to find me?? haha u r like a little bug ur always there... and just when i least expect you.. you pop up out of nowhere... lol its ok tho.. i luv ya!! haha jk.. hehe.. wuts up??

**meggie**

ooh, i want attention! :P just wrote 4 new poems, feeling very emotional.. teehe..

haha yeah, I'm that annoying little bugger aren't I ? :P

haha not much is up, what about you ?

Jessy! I'll give you your attention really soon =P I'm just finishing this song thing Lol..

darien:

ahh not much... just hanging around... im @ school, trying to find some amazing poems! haha... and naw, you aren't an annoying little bugger, ur a annoying B-I-G bugger... haha just kidding... lol ur not annnoying... ur really cool actually..! :-D

**meggie**

haha thanks Meggie :P

amazing poems eh?.. haven't you heard of the poet Darien? Geez, that guy is pretty damn good :P lmao jks. I wish everything at school could be taught through poetry.. maybe I wouldn't have had problems with math.. haha enjoy it :P

hmm.. Natalie.. you're writting another song?..
ohhhh let me know when you're done!!! ..

actually .. I would love to hear it sometime..
if you have music to go with it that..

Lol.. Yeah.. I'm trying too, But I'm kinda stuck >.<

And I don't have music for it either =[ Lol But I'm working on that.

If i can get a hold of the people I use to deejay with I can get some cool music for it..it just wont be rock or anything, it'll have to be techno/dance kinda stuff.

Lol, well that's at least tolerable.
If you need some ideas, private message me,
I'm sure I can help you out :)

hehe, yay! getting attention and getting to read another one your poems! :P *very happy*

yay my post made people very happy!! haha yipeeee!!!

**meggie**

As observed there are not too many poems written for children. I heard a professor in Hong Kong who suggested poets to write poetry for the children, because there is not easy to find poem for the children. Most of the poets who write for the commercial purposes only for adults.

Please go to read there are a few pieces of my poetry are written for the children. This morning, I just posted a new poem "Happy Swing" for the children. Welcome your reading and offer comments.

hehe, yupp, very happy! :P

Lol.. Yup..It is fuuun. Cause I accidently woke my dad up. its 2:40am here =O Oops. Lol..

Lol, ohhh that's right.
Aussie time :P
(14 hours from my time).. I know tha because my girlfriend was in Austrailia about a week ago.

lol, its 10:48 PM here :P

Lol.. I wish it was atleast that early here. I'm so nocternal, I rekon I was a bat in a previous life, Prob makes sence since my names natalie, nat = bat ..yeah lol..okay, i'll just go and work on this song..

haha! :P kk, you work away.. lol, nite nite everyone! gonna go do some homework.. urg.. lol!

Ha! Lol.. okay. Night night tehe

It's 1:00pm here..

it's weird.. it's like West, Central and East
wow.. we're cool :P

Lol.. Yup! We are cool =P

So how is your song coming along ??..

Umm..Okay I spose..It's no where near finished though...

hahha keep trying.. just take a walk and look for some inspiration.. when you wake up that is..
i wouldnt want you walking around late hours of the night..

Haha, yeah but by the time i wake up tomorrow the day would have prob ended already..

But nahh, I'll prob finish it soon, I've got the kind of beat that i want in my head, so its getting easier now. I've only done the first verse and the bridge so far, but the verse has 8 lines, so yeah. im working on the chorus nowww =D

Well as long as you have a stable beat in your head, then it will be easy. You have a lot to work with. Just look at your first verse, and try to extend it, then split it into 2 verses. As for a Chrous, I have problems writing good ones, so you're on your own for that! :P

Tehe. Yay. I did the chorus =D Lol

haha, nice.

I'm patiently waiting for it :)
just let me know when it's done.

There was a time when my sister-in-law (hunbun830) was loved on here...but her world comsumed her and she doesn't write much any more. Though, MAYBE if you all go to her poem she has posted...and BEEEGGG her to write again she'll write more for me to read!! LOL She is truly amazing but family life keeps her busy.

My friend Erin use to be on here..
she was a good writer.
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I'll check them both out when I'm done. Just one more verse to go. Yay ^_^

I'm finished! ^_^ Buuuut, I don't know which category it should go in >.< It's like a sad song, But with lots and lots of hope and happyness in it..

Hmm, just post it what you think it should go under, and I can let you know if it suits it or not. Then you could just edit it :)

Otay =] I posted it. I don't think it's that great though..