can you please tell me if im going wrong

can you please comment on my poems and if you like them vote as i dont know if im wasting my time writting poerty as dont know if im any good thanks and i will repay the favour too

I haven't read any of your poetry yet, but I can definately say that it's not a waste of time. Expressing your feelings, no matter what form, is a gift that not everybody can achieve or even find the confidence to do so. I think to be able to write your heart out and then post it for the world to see is a very noble thing to do.. it shows that you know who you are and a sense of self security. Keep on writing! Not everybody starts off good, but everyone has to start somewhere. With time, and practise, things will get better =)

I also can't wait to read some of your work.. it may be a while, but eventually I will get to it. School's hectic right now, so when I'm off I'll have a lot more time =)