There are two poems of mine are very welcome in another poetry w

I have posted right here with two pieces of my poems which are very popular and welcome in another poetry websites. I don't why they are not attractive enough for the members right in this website?
I think most having not really read carefully upon my poetry art works get understanding on my saying. Pleas you would really read them carefully:

1. My Dear Moon Lady.

2. Chicken Birds and Beasts Resentment.

Both of these two are written with full emotion from
deeper of my heart. You may feel a story or sense from them. Please you try get understand on them.

Sfiawong, that some of your poetry is appreciated elsewhere does not mean that it MUST be appreciated here as well.

My problem when reading your work is that, although I can see your effort and excellent ideas, your weak grammar does not allow me to understand everything you are possibly trying to say. Poetry is already difficult to interpret (if crafted masterfully), but you make it even harder with your language. Please do consider this, not as an insult, but as a suggestion and an explanation on why we do not appreciate your poetry as much as others do.

You may find my works easily just type my pen name 'sfiawong' into the search engine that will surely bring you to my works in both English and Chinese too.

you can frankly point out my English mistake or grammar mistake, so that I can learn and improve it in my heart. Most new poets in the internet nowaday are amateurs only.