lost my wife

ok, i admit, i am not that good at poetry, obviousely im not because nobody posts comments or anything but i am trying to be a good poet and i wrote these for my wife after she passed away last year. so i am really hoping that someone can check out my page and read all of my poems and post some comments instead of just looking at it and leaving the page. because i am really needing some feedback on this people. if im not good at it than i need to know instead of posint crappy poems over and over again. so please, if you would, check them all out

I did one =]

...Although this thread should probably be in the commenting section thingy.

`Taleee xx