If your looking for 2 good poems, come here!

i have just written 2 poems and i think they are really really good, i know i wrote them so its biased but i am really proud of them, so please comment on them.

We can
Dead Serious

It would mean alot to me if you could comment. thankyou my friends and i will return the favour
xxxxxx

I'm about to try and write some lyrics. If you can read that when it's done that would be nice. I'm trying to make some kind of homemade birthday gift for a friend whose birthday is at the end of summer. Thought I'd start on it early :)

Thanks Kaylee, I just kinda noticed that my poems are getting better. I guess when i have something more important to say i can make my poems better. But then dont we all improve in time?

can you read: My heart keeps beatin'

will do now, my friend
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nice writes tara.

If its not to much trouble read/comment "whos better" and another of your choice.

thank you

~glass~