Why there are not too many members who like my poem 'My Life'?

"My Life' is one of my best poems, which gained many fans like it, if you can read it carefully and get understand it thoroughly. The 2nd one is 'My Dear Moon Lady.'

Both of these are worthy to be read and repeatly read. A glance upon it the first time, you might so easy let it passes you eyes got no sense.

okay, as long as you could do
Don't give up (and/or) Dead Serious

Thanks