~ANOTHER FUN CONTEST!!! WHOO!!!!~

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Hello this is ~Blossoming Bush~ aka Allanah!

and this is ANOTHER contest!!! WHOO!!!!

yeah so.. rule type thingys!!!

1. Must be YOUR poem!!! (blah blah blah)

2. Must be NEWLY written... (for those of you, must have just thought of it!)

3. NO cussing (except for certain titles... i.e.#7) or being mean to peeps. (=) and no slang)

4. You must use one of MY titles!!! (haha i rule all!!!) {just kidding about the last part....}

5. ONLY one poem per person!!!!

6. Contest ends June 30th so kick it up people!!!!

Okay... NOW for the fun part!

Title type things...

1. Lonely- TAKEN, SORRY
2. Lost and Found- TAKEN, SORRY
3. Against My Will- RESERVED
4. Leave Me Here- TAKEN, SORRY
5. Gone and Forgotten-TAKEN, SORRY
6. Never To Return- TAKEN, SORRY
7. R.I.P. and Rot In Hell- TAKEN, SORRY
8. Insanity Strikes- TAKEN, SORRY
9. A Kid Again- TAKEN, SORRY
10. Aching Heart- TAKEN, SORRY

So go at it and have fun!!!!!

I will post when a title is taken or reserved!!!!

And now for the best part!!!!

PRIZES!!!! WHOO!!!!!

1st place- 5 poems r/r/c AND a spot on my faves list!!!

2nd- 3 poems r/r/c

3rd- 2 poems r/r/c

Below 3rd- 1 poem r/r/c AND another chance at another contest! (If you are willing to enter)

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7. RIP and Rot In Hell

I can't say that I'm sad,
that you've gone away
and died.
I can't say that I'll miss you,
because that would be
a lie.
I could say that I hate you
but thats not
strong enough.
So I guess what I will say,
is rest in peace (or rather pieces),
and rot in hell.

*it's short, but I like it*

can i reserve #6 pleasee? thank youu!

9. A Kid Again

Her mind so lost, her skin so pale.
How could this go wrong, where did she fail?
Running away from a violent home,
Leaving nothing, no note, or the number to her phone.
Her dad used to hit her, she couldn't take it anymore,
She would never go back, live that life, she was sure.
She ran and she ran, anywhere but here,
Beginning a new life, living every day in fear.
Finding a nice man, and got her own little girl,
Until she found his dark side, perfect was her world.
She tries to stop him, but he just won't quit,
he beat up his child, because she wouldn't fit.
The little girl bleeds, crying her last tear,
The mother tied up, meeting her worst, cold fear.
The man she used to love, was going so damn wild,
Puncing and kicking, his own little child.
"Stop it, stop it, take me instead"
the mother cries to the man, fearing her own child dead.
He looks crazy, as he looks at his wife,
He goes to the kitchen, gets a kinfe.
"Shut up, or Ill kill her!" loud he screams,
He looks so cold, she wonders if its just her dreams.
He smiles his as the little girl prayes her last amen.
He runs the kinfe over her troath, and the womans feels like just a kid again.

#1 Lonely

Lay on my bed
Dream away tears
Holding my heart
Hope disappears

Take out a photo
Glance at the past
Alone in this world
How long can I last

The walls are stained
With words of pain
Secrets are held
till they are slain

I'm lonely by myself
With No hands to hold
No arms to feel
So I grow cold

I no longer can live
A timid life like mine
My life has flown me by
Through the waves of time

#6 Never to Return

On a warm Saturday night
You quickly give me a kiss
You wave me goodbye
And stroll out the door..

I sit down and think
Of our magical wedding
The following week
And all the plans
Of the beautiful baby
That shall be born..

As I dream of our future
And smile at our past
My eyelids slowly close
And I drift silently to sleep..

The strange noise
That aroused me
Was not one
That should have been heard
In the hours of darkness..

The loud ringing of the phone
Disturbed the peace that
Surrounded me
And brought me
Back to my senses..

I quickly picked it up
And the voice at the other end
Did not sound comforting..

It was the soft voice of a man
There were sirens in the background
And I instantly started to panic..

The man told me
That there had been an accident
I wince but think confusedly
“Why is he telling me this?”

And then it dawns on me
As tears stream down my face
The man sadly notifies me
That it was a drunk driver..
And that the love of my life
Did not suffer, but was killed instantly..

As I listen quietly to these words..
I drop the phone..
I slide down the wall
And start to sob
Sob after sob
Explodes from within me..
And as I cry, I sit
Sit and wait for the man
That I know
Is never to return..

Great poems, guys!!! 6 titles left, come on!!!!

and there are 18 days left!!!!! COME ON SPEEED UP THE PROCESS!!!!

i wanna reserve 3 ill do it later.

okay, its reserved! reserved poems last 5 days because the time limit is short... sorry.

thats ok i shood have it dun by 2morro neway im just kinda under stress 2day n havin writers blok
~*W.C?*!

omg i just noticed i meant 2 say 5 not 3 im so sry!!!! i can do 3 if itd b easier then u changing it...

its okay lol. I'll change the reserved mark since 5 isnt done yet.

C'mon C'mon!!!!

Can I reserve 'Insanity Strikes' I should have it done by later tonight, It's 6:05pm here. So maybe around 9pm?

Woo. I'm done now =D But, It's not that good..

8]Insanity Strikes.

Her world is spinning so out of control,
Falling deeper into that dark black hole.
Thoughts of life are racing inside her mind,
Forcing her to leave herself left behind.

Trapped inside a hurtful world she calls life,
Reaching for some support without the knife.
Pleading to the sky above, Please no more,
Questions left unanswered just like before.

Insanity strikes when the lightening hits,
Her worst crime of all she's soon to commit.
As the crystal clear rain falls from the sky,
She drowns in her sins and says a goodbye.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

Wow... great poems people! come on i need 4 more!!!!

Whoever reserved Gone and Forgotten...

I will take it off the reserved list on friday... PLEASE have it done by then! ='(

Leave Me Here

Leave me in this sacred place,
where noone will see my scarred face.

Leave me in this open tomb,
in a place where there's never room.

Leave me where there is no hope,
where all is lost, including hope.

An orphan to humanity,
a child, victim of poverty.

Leave me here, where love is not,
where everything is killed or fought.

yay!!!! great job everybody!!!! 3 poems... and 17 days.. left!!!!

There, I DID IT!

5.Gone and Forgotten

Gone, blown away with the wind,
Forgotten and alone, left behind.
Like a flash of lightning, there then gone,
Like a lightbulb, sometimes off others on.

Forgotten like one single drop of rain,
Had a short life that ended in pain.
How could you do this, I thought you cared,
But like everyone says, Life isn't fair.

Gone and forgotten, my life is done,
There is no more life, no more fun.
There's only clouds, never sun,
So I ended my life, with a gun.

woot!! thanx i would have felt bad if i had to take it off the reserved list...

3 LEFT!!!!!

lets go lets go... im gettin old here! =)

Cmon people!!! =D Lol

Thanx -^-»TaLe3e!!!!!! 3 poems... 16 days... which will come first?!

hurryhurryhurryhurry

sorry im bored and hyper and have nothing else to do.

COME ON PEOPLE... DO U HAVE WRITERS BLOCK OR SOMETHING!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

be patient young grasshopper.

YES I HAVE WRITERS BLOCK! but i will take 'against my will' anyways.

I'll do a Aching Heart. I haven't written in a long while so it might not be all that good.

Aching Heart

My heart aches when I dream,
about you.
My body tosses and turns.
I'm restless.

I dream about your carressing lips
My body pressed against your body.
Your whispers of sweet nothings
and promises of passion.
A moan escapes my lips.

I've become possessed.
My aching heart dreams of you
while I wait for my aching heart
To ache no more.

great poem!!!

reserved poem will last one week.

one more one more one more!!!!!!!!

lol ty

:)

come on just one left!!!!!! ooohhh i cant wait!!!!

ur so impatient Ally, gues that comes with the territory huh?

one moreee! c'mon people! just one more!

allow me reserve the last one,lost and found,try to hand in as soon as possible,thanks!

WHOO!!!

YAYNESSETH