-1 For 2- OR -2 For 3-

Heyy! All you have to do is read, rate, && comment on these 2 poems and you will get 3 in return!

-Blood Red Lips

&&

-Never to Return

[[ 1 For 2 OR 2 For 3 ]]

Both of these were written for contests and i would appreciate some honest feedback! Thank you in advacee!

hehe, okayy.. thanks for the help.. just wondering how i could make them have more rythym? lol..

lol.. gonna close this after im done ur poems :)