Summers Breeze - Will Return Honest Comments :]

I did it =)

Could you please do my newest two?
`Insanity Strikes
`Bleeding Hearts

Thanks a bunch =)

`Taleee. xx.

HEy sorry I moved lol haven't been online much. BUt I would love it if you could read my lyrics. They're on my featured and there's three and I'll catch up on some poems of yours I missed

Since I need to catch up on your poems anyway, I would really like to know what you think of, "My heart keeps beatin'" and "Cryin' over roses." I might send them to my friend for his birthday if I get a couple of real good honest opinions. It's up to you. I loved your new poem and I'm going to go catch up on your others now.

Ive commented

hey i'll run and give ur poem summers breeze HONEST critique....please do the same for my poem paradise....i dont mind you saying it sucks...but i want to improve