~*Unique Beautiful Musical Titles CONTEST*~ Lots of Titles!!

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    CLOSEd CLOSED

    Why unique? These titles come from modern piano compositions. Stretch your talents to see how BEAUTIFUL and FLOWING your poems can be
    The USUAL Rules~Pick a Title

    1st Place- 6 r/c
    2nd-5 r/c
    3rd- 4 r/c
    Hm- 2 r/c

    1. Unchained Melody-TAKEN
    2. Tears in heaven (written after the writer's daughter fell from their window)TAKEN

    3. Threads of Love
    4. Hymne
    5. Wind beneath my Wings
    6. Down in the Valley
    7. From the Heart-TAKEN
    8. Autumn Sketch-TAKEN
    9. Swirling Winds
    10. Expressions-
    11. I surrender All-TAKEN
    12. It Is Well with My Soul
    13. Gentle in the Night
    14. Forest Lake-TAKEN
    15. Rights of Man
    16. Forever Goodbye-RESERVED
    17. Someone Just like you
    18. Young at Heart-TAKEN
    19. Angel Eyes-
    20. Strings of Light
    21. Daybreak-TAKEN
    22. Nostalgia
    23. Recollection-TAKEN
    24. Limitless Love
    25. October Rain-TAKEN
    26. Serenade

  • Ye Seul
    18 years ago

    hang on, let me just have a look and then i'll tell you which one ill do :)

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    Can i pleasee reserve 8. Autumn Sketch?? if yes, thank youu!

  • Poetess Lana
    18 years ago

    Tears In Heaven

    There are no tears in Heaven.
    This I know is true,
    for every time i feel upset,
    I stop to think of you, my dear
    sweet child, the new angel.

    While you are in Heaven,
    I will think of you each and
    every day. You are my dear
    sweet child, and nothing can
    upset you.

    My dreams of you are nothing
    else, and i want you to know,
    That without you as my child,
    I have nobody to hold.

    You are my angel, but you
    have gone so soon, and although
    I cry each night for you
    You make me realize,
    there will never be tears in Heaven.

    _____________________________________________________________________
    I dont like it very much... but we sang the song in school so i wrote it! Not the lyrics... I thought it was is son who fell out the window?

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    ooh i wanna reserve 18 young at heart because..i kno that song:D

  • RetroRavey
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve #25 October Rain? Please.

  • RetroRavey
    18 years ago

    nvm, sorry for the inconvienience

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Come ON People!!

  • Kaylee
    18 years ago

    can I reserve forever goodbye

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve #7 From The Heart?

    I'll have it done hopefully by tonight. It's 11:01am Where I live. So yeah. Just so you know how long I'll take.

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Double post sorry. =(

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    Young at Heart

    Old and widowed, alone in her room,
    This is where, she’ll face her silent doom.
    At 98, she’s lived such a life so full,
    As she drifts off, wrapped in the sheet of wool.

    She remembers, when she was young,
    The very first time, she got stung-
    By a bee, and how she cried,
    How she made that “little sucker” die.

    Older now, she remembers prom,
    As she posed for pictures for her mom.
    Her date arrived, and they danced the night away,
    People still remember, how pretty she was today.

    Fast-forward to marriage, her walking down the aisle,
    As all the guests would sniffle, and smile.
    She said, “I do” to the man she loved so long,
    As they walked out of the church as they played a song.

    Three years later, a child is now around,
    Another one coming soon, still not a frown.
    The love between them all, hold them together,
    For they are all so in love with one another.

    More in the future, the children are away,
    They’re at college now, yet the parents stay.
    They’re getting older now, yet still young at heart,
    And they love each other as much as when they start.

    Grandchildren now around, kids visit little,
    Love bond holds together, still not brittle.
    Her grand kids call her often, yet see her never,
    Yet their love’s as strong as ever.

    Fast-forward again, the husband’s dead,
    He grew old and sicker, let it go to his head.
    He’s underneath the ground now, she’s all alone,
    She’s still alive and breathing, yet on her own.

    She’s still, young at heart, yet now by herself,
    She’d give anything to have him back, even her wealth.
    As she drifts off into a deeper sleep, never to return,
    For all she wanted was him, it was her only concern.

    ~*Who Cares?*~
    Hope Mine's Ok.

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    7]From The Heart

    Her graceful arms spread out just like a bird,
    As music flows it's just how she pictured.
    The whole audience are clapping their hands,
    Applauding her courage to make a stand.

    From the heart is where the passion must be,
    And as the girl dances the crowd can see.
    She knows what she wants and how she must fight,
    She'll dance with fire under the spotlight.

    She doesn't believe in fear no longer,
    When she's come this far, Become much stronger.
    Nothing now will stop her from succeeding,
    It's her life and she's doing the leading.

    From the heart and soul is how she must dance,
    To finally receive that second chance.
    She'll prove to the crowd that she's made for this,
    And that opportunity she won't miss.

    Copyright © Natalie 2006

    {Hope that's okay.}

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Good job Everyone! Keep them Coming!!

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    IM DOING ANGEL EYES! HANDS OFF!

  • StarGirl
    18 years ago

    I'd like to reserve #11. I surrender All. ^_^

  • StarGirl
    18 years ago

    Ok... this isn't that great, I'm just getting back into writing so... lol yeah.

    #11. I surrender all
    The people are whispering.
    The angels are smiling.
    They all stand around the hosptial bed.
    I can't leave them!
    The angels smiled but said nothing.
    The people were crying
    It was all one big mistake.
    The angels just smiled
    So peacefully, so secrene.
    I asked, 'What's heaven like?'
    An angels lips softly brushed my cheek.
    I suddenly knew what heaven was like.
    'Will they be okay?'
    The angesl just smiled
    Warm arms embraced me.
    And I knew that
    I must surender all.

  • moonriver
    18 years ago

    Forest lake

    It still clearly imprints in my memory

    When it took place

    Leaves painted forest gloomy

    Fluttering and dancing in grace

    We once larked like kids

    Swimming in the fallen leaves

    Glittering briskly in the sun rays

    Our laughter was floating in the breeze

    You were determined to walk out of my sight

    I knew you only sealed your heart

    Gazing at the still lake water on that serene night

    In a trance, a voice stammered we were bound to part

    Raindrops killed the last days of summer

    Peevish wind froze my bloodstream

    Hardly can I be attracted by another drifter

    Everything faded with the dream

    A shadow was left solitary

    Cast by the sadness of deserting

    Watching the still water dimly

    My life is withering

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    ok then can i reserve October Rain?

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    instead of 'angel eyes' i want to do 'expressions'

  • Oscar
    18 years ago

    October Rain

    you don't know how you make me feel, standing here next to you. knowing that i love you, and hoping you love me too. the dark purple sky, with clouds all around. as the soft rain falls on us, and we listen to the sound.

    i wish it would never end, this beautiful October rain, because when i'm with you, i can feel no pain. as we lay on the ground, staring up at a star. i think of all the good times, and how we've come so far.

    had i only just known, it would be our last night. had i only just known, this would be your last sight. i never would have left, from that soft spot on the ground, where we lay every day, because that's where each other, we found.

    but now i'm alone, you're simply a memory. forgotten by all, all of course except me. i kept you in my heart, still you're a shattered dream. i don't want to let go, but you're fading into steam.

    i want to be with you, want to see you anew. so i found out a way, to be with you real soon. and as i pick up this gun, and hold it up to my brain. i'll never forget, that this is my last October Rain.

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    I'd like to reserve Unchained Melody ^^

  • Avrii Monrielle
    18 years ago

    Unchained Melody (#1)

    I close my eyes and strike a key
    The piano beckoning to me
    Sitting on a long, smooth chair
    Of the world, I do not care

    White walls and clean carpet
    Outside the ocean view
    Music on the brink of my desire
    Keys, I pray, do light my heart on fire!

    A man and woman dancing in a park
    Looking in each others eyes, each other's hearts
    Illuminated by the moonlight, the silver moonlight
    Dancing, smiling in the dark

    A violin playing with a harp
    Emotions fly in a battle for attention
    "Bravo!" yells the clapping crowd
    Both win honorable mentions

    A harmonica playing sweet tunes
    From a man sitting on a bridge at noon
    The sun will be gone soon
    He, in a happy mood

    A voice singing, tears splashing
    Like champagne poured straight from a bottle
    River forming at her feet
    But she sings a song so sweet

    I close my eyes and go to sleep
    Loving all of my sweet dreams
    Bury my head into the pillow
    An unchained melody is taking over me

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    COME ON PEOPLE! AT LEAST GIVE IT A TRY!

  • Suchapoetictradgedy
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve #21.....Daybreak?!?

    Thank you!
    ~Flying High~

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    sure

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Come one People, There's alot of titles left!

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    One more week for those reserved people! Hurry up!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    wait...does this contest last until all the titles are done?!

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    At least most of them, there's too many left, and there's a couple that's still reserved

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    oh i know i was just wondering...

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Please people!

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Cmon people!! Lol

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    ~Recollection (MLK Jr.)~

    I wonder what Martin would think,
    if he took a look at our generation,
    and saw that those he once stood for,
    have succumbed to degradation.

    He'd scowl at the way women are treated,
    by the men of their own race.
    Treated as nothing more than property,
    a nationwide disgrace.

    He'd watch the hip-hop videos,
    turning his head as if not to see,
    women dancing half-naked,
    right upside Snoop D O double G.

    He would see the war is civil now,
    race no longer divides the sides.
    The black population kills itself,
    gang members who kill to survive.

    He'd realize that his time was wasted,
    no improvements have been made.
    There is only one true difference now,
    whites aren't needed to degrade.

    ~Sean Dohr~

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    Beautiful! Keep them coming!

  • Rain
    18 years ago

    when does it end?

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    I hope to get those reserved poems done, I think you reserved Expressions.

    There's still too little poems for me to judge

  • Suchapoetictradgedy
    18 years ago

    Daybreak (#21)

    Swirling winds surround my thought,
    Cushioning my so very harsh movements!
    Floating atop the wind, you must be near!

    Not quite able to grasp this new found "drug"
    I have begun to rely so heavily upon, this "drug"
    Your love, holds me through it all!

    When daybreak comes I can feel your soft goodbye.
    When daybreak nears hurridly you get ready, ready
    To leave me alone again to float on cloud 9!

    My passion for you is unexplainable, uncharactersitic
    For me, so out of the box! I am a sensible person,
    Not one to fall so rapidly; so forcefully!

    Daybreak has come and gone, so many times!
    This daybreak is here, and yet so are you!
    Once again I am atop the wind, floating and basking!

    Love is such a strong, foreful, word, yet it flows
    So gracefully when the thoughts are refering to you!
    My love save me from myself, from it all!

    You caught me when I fell from life, when I
    Couldnt take it any longer, when I didnt have
    The strength to stand, you held me!

    Our love stronger than life, than death, than anything
    Else on this planet, or out of this world! Our love,
    Is saving grace, its fireworks and bells ringing!

    This is real love!

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    #8 Autumn Sketch

    I sit back and close my eyes
    The sweet aroma of pine
    Floats with the breeze
    Around my face

    I take a deep breathe
    Open my hazel eyes
    And take in the beauty

    The golden leaves
    Flutter in the gentle wind
    Gracefully falling from
    The thick branches

    The flowers
    Just starting
    To say goodbye
    Close up and get ready
    For another
    Long, peaceful sleep

    And as I gaze
    At the picture in front of me
    My hands start to move
    Across the paper

    Capturing every detail
    Every uniqueness..
    The beauty before me
    Appearing slowly on my paper

    It hangs on the pale wall
    Of my warm home
    For everyone to see
    To forever be entranced by
    My autumn sketch..

  • LadyPearl
    18 years ago

    One more Day!!