Emotional Landslide [Sedoka]

It's one for two =)

And, PLEASE don't write in your comment I should make it longer. If you read down the bottom it explains the type of poem it is and everything. Make sure you rate aswell please. =)

Cmon people. It's gonna start getting downvoted soon because of the structure.

That's ridiculous. People aren't true poetry fans if they downvote because of the writing style.

I know. I posted it. And straight away it had gotten a one. And then I went and looked at the poems submitted at the same time, And they were all downvoted aswell. So I just deleted it and then re-submitted it. That's why it's got what it's got written at the bottom. So many people downvote poems like that cause they don't realise it's meant to be set out like that.